手把手教你写中考书面表达 话题一 校园生活(解析版）
话题突破
研究近5年全国中考书面表达试题可以发现,校园生活是中考的一个热点话题。 此话题主要从以下四个方面进行设题:1.学校的学习生活;2.学校的活动与安排;3.三年初中生活难忘的事;4.学校的安全教育及校纪校规。
主题一典型剖析(一）
（2019年岳阳市）假如下面是你们班教室里的照片墙，墙上记录了中考前学习和生活的点点滴流，以及考前老师的温馨提示。忘不了备战中考时充实而快乐的时光，请你以“Preparation for High School Entrance Exam”（备战中考）为题，写一篇80-100词的短文。 1. 请阐述图中信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； 3. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确。
学习区 Listen to the teacher 生活区 Eat healthy food 提示区 Avoid making mistakes Take notes Exercise Learn to relax 1
Have enough sleep Finish doing… …
Preparation for High School Entrance Exam
… Be on time … ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
教你审题
仔细审读所给文字提示,可以提取以下信息: 1.主题:介绍备战中考的时光。 2.体裁:记叙文。 3.人称:第一人称。 4.时态:一般过去时为主。
5.思路点拨:建议用三段式来写:第一段,引出话题——High School Entrance Exam is arriving. I still remember the days when our teachers and students worked together to prepare for it.第二段,主要从三个方面进行介绍：学习、生活以及老师对学生的提示。第三段,首尾呼应We will remember the days of preparing for the high school entrance examination forever.
思路导图
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点明
结尾 佳作赏析
Preparation for High School Entrance Exam High School Entrance Exam is arriving.① I still remember the days when our teachers and students worked together to prepare for it. In order to get a good grade, we all listened to the teachers carefully in class and took notes at the same time. After class, we finished our homework on time. 赏析: reparation for High School Entrance Exam 回忆了自己和老师们一起备战中考的一段充实、快乐的时光（学习、生活以及老师对学生的鼓励及谆谆教诲） High School ① listened to the teachers carefully and took notes finished our homework on time. be careful in the exam and avoid making mistakes. ②did exercise every day and had enough sleep ③Teachers helped some studying problems. Our teachers told us to eat healthy food，not to feel stressful and learn to relax。 We will remember the days of preparing for the high school entrance examination forever. ①我仍然记得我们的老师和学生一起为它准备的日子。 使用定语从句。 ②使用了if引导的条件状语从句。 ③使用了encouraged sb. not to do sth and keep on ②If we had some difficult problems, our teachers would doing. explain to us in details. ③All the teachers encouraged us not to give up and keep on studying.④ Besides, to study well, health comes first. Our teachers told us to eat healthy food, such as eggs, meat, vegetables and so on. We also did exercise every day and had enough sleep. The teachers told us not to feel stressful and learn to relax. ⑤We must be careful in the exam and avoid ④使用了联接词除…之外Besides, 及动词不定式充当主语。 ⑤使用情态动词must be careful及短语avoid doing。 ⑥使用连接词What’s more而且。 ⑦使用what引导感叹句多么充实快乐的时光啊! ⑧首尾呼应We will remember the days of preparing for the high school entrance examination forever. 3
making mistakes. ⑥What’s more, we must be on time. We all felt tired and nervous, ⑦but what a full and happy time! ⑧We will remember the days of preparing for the high school entrance examination forever.
提分短语
中考 High School Entrance Exam 准备prepare for 为了 In order to 取得好成绩get a good grade
记笔记 take notes 同时at the same time. 及时 on time 详细地in details
鼓励 不要放弃 encouraged us not to give up 继续keep on
感觉有压力 feel stressful 小心 be careful
避免犯错误 avoid making mistakes. 更重要的是What’s more 感到疲倦和紧张 feel tired and nervous, 提分句子 开篇句:中考就要到了。
High School Entrance Exam is arriving 我还记得我们的老师和学生一起工作的日子做准备。
I still remember the days when our teachers and students worked together to prepare for it. 结尾句:我们将永远记住准备高中入学考试的日子。
We will remember the days of preparing for the high school entrance examination forever. 点睛句:为了取得好成绩，我们上课认真听讲，同时做笔记。
In order to get a good grade, we all listened to the teachers carefully in class and took notes at the same time. 如果我们有一些困难的问题,我们的老师会祥细地解释给我们听。
If we had some difficult problems, our teachers would explain to us in details. 所有的老师鼓励我们不要放弃,继续努力学习。
All the teachers encouraged us not to give up and keep on studying. 老师告诉我们不要感到有压力，要学会放松。
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The teachers told us not to feel stressful and learn to relax. ⑤在考试中我们必须小心,避免犯错误。
We must be careful in the exam and avoid making mistakes. 更重要的是,我们必须准时。
What’s more, we must be on time. We all felt tired and nervous. 但是多么一个充实和快乐的时光!
but what a full and happy time!
主题一典型剖析(二）
[2018福建中考A]假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Henry对武术感兴趣。请你根据图表提示,用英语给他写一封电子邮件,邀请他暑期来观摩你校举办的首届武术节,感受中华武术文化。词数80左右。
Time Activities History of Wushu
Benefits(益处) of Wushu
注意事项:
(1)必须包含所提示的信息,可适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数; (2)意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
(3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。 参考词汇:practice Wushu练武 Dear Henry, I am glad that you are interested in Wushu. Yours, Li Hua 教您审题
July 7 to 9, 2018 competitions,shows thousands of years
…
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仔细审读所给文字提示,可以提取以下信息: 1.主题:Invitation for the first Wushu festival。 2.体裁:应用文。
3.人称:描写对方时用第二人称,描写自己时用第一人称。 4.时态:一般现在时为主,一般将来时为辅。
5.思路点拨:要点以文字和图表形式给出,信息比较多,不要遗漏。其中练习武术的益处需要考生适当发挥。文章可分三段:第一段点明主题,邀请对方来参加首届武术节,并介绍武术节的时间和具体活动,第二段介绍中国武术的历史以及练习武术的益处;第三段结尾。
思路导图
点明主题 Invitation of The first Wushu festival 武术的历史和练习武术的益 处 结尾
佳作赏析
Dear Henry, 赏析:
I am glad that you are interested in Wushu. Here
①使用is going to be held(一般将来时的被动语态),体现了
I’ve got good news for you. ①The first Wushu
扎实的语言基本功。
festival of our school is going to be held from July
②使用would like to和invite sb. to短语。
7 to 9, 2018. ②I’d like to invite you to the
③使用了短语a history of和thousands of。
festival. You can watch many Wushu competitions
④用动名词短语作主语,提升了文章的档次;a good way to
and enjoy wonderful shows.
do sth.的使用丰富了文章的表达。
③Chinese Wushu has a history of thousands of
⑤使用连接词besides,使衔接更自然,并且使用了help sb.
years. ④Practicing Wushu is a good way to
to do sth.结构。
improve our health. ⑤Besides, it helps us to
⑥使用look forward to doing sth.短语,表达了作者的期待。
develop a strong will. Most of us like it very much.
a history of thousands of years. a good way to improve our health. help us to develop a strong will. Looking forward to seeing you soon. I’d like to invite you to the festival. 6
I hope you will come and experience Chinese Wushu culture.
⑥Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours, Li Hua 满分积累
提分短语
与某人分享……share...with sb. 遵守学校规则obey the school rules 远离keep away from 坚持做某事stick to doing sth. 相信我自己believe in myself 做些有意义的事do something meaningful 提分句子 开篇句:
我很高兴跟你们分享我们的学校生活。
I’m glad to share our school life with you. 时间过得真快!
How times flies! 很荣幸可以给你们做演讲。
It is a great honor for me to make a speech for you. 我认为遵守学校规章制度对我们来说很重要。 I think it’s important for us to obey the school rules. 结尾句:
总之,通过学习我们可以更多地了解世界。
In short, we can learn more about the world by studying. 我们应该互相帮助,以共同进步。
We’re supposed to help each other to make progress together. 点睛句:
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活到老,学到老。 It’s never too old to learn.
活着就要学习,学习是为了更好地活着。 To live is to learn, to learn is to better live. 我认为相信自己是成功的关键。
I think believing in myself is the key to success.
主题（二）真题回放
Writing 1
[2019厦门质检]回首三年,相信你有满满的回忆。在你将踏上新的旅程之际,请给新入学的学弟学妹们两则对初中生活的建议,并说说原因,让他们的初中生活更加精彩! 请参考下面的思维导图用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
【参考范文】
My Advice for Junior High
Junior high is an important stage in your life.As a student who is about to enter junior high, your heart must be filled with expectation. To help you get used to the junior high life, I will share you three pieces of advice. First, establish your routines. By doing this, you can quickly fall into a pattern that feels familiar and comfortable. Second, be sure to try new things. You can join new clubs. This can help you make more friends.Third,whenever you are in trouble, turn to your teachers for advice.They are always friendly and ready to help you. I hope my advice can be helpful to you and make you enjoy your life in the junior high school.
Writing 2
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（2019新疆 ）初中生活即将结束，请你想一下，谁是你最喜欢的老师？他、她长什么样子？你为什么喜欢他、她？以 My favorite Teacher 为题，用英语写一篇短文，请根据要点进行描述，可以结合具体事例，也可以适当增加自己想写的内容。
要点：
1. What does he/ she look like? 2. Why do you like him/her? 3. ……… 注意：
1. 词数 80~100
2. 可适当增加细节及要点以外的内容，要求行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。 【参考范文】
My Favorite Teacher
I'd Like to say thanks to my English teacher. He is very tall and handsome. He has straight brown hair and he doesn’t wear glasses. He usually wear jeans, a T-shirt and sports shoes. I like him because he it really cool and fun, and he is good at soccer. He can always make his class lively and interesting. What's more, he is patient and kind to us students. With his help, we have had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English. I want to say -Thank you!\" to my dear teacher. The love and support from him will be with us forever.
Writing 3
（2019北京） 题目②自律，即自我约束，是自我提升的一种途径，有助于我们成长，促使我们不断前行。 某英文网站正在开展以“自律”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈为了增强自律意识，你做过什么，以及这样做给你带来的好处。 提示词语：self-disciplined(自律的), plan, goal, habit, improve 提示问题：●What did you do to be self-disciplined? ●What benefits have you got from doing so? Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. 9
【参考范文】
To be honest, I am a person who is self-disciplined. I used to follow all kinds of rules and hand in the tasks appointed on time at school. And I could not only respected all my teachers but also get on well with my classmates. At home, I was able to balance housework and homework. I usually made a plan in advance to make it easier to achieve my goal. After finishing all the tasks, I developed the habit of going to bed early and getting up early. In the society, I spared no effort to improve myself all the time.
In a word, I have benefited a lot from being self-discipline. First of all, I have had many good habits, which makes my life easier and more regular. Secondly, my life and my study have been of high efficiency so that a lot of time has been saved. Thirdly, being self-disciplined has prepared me for a better and brighter future. In the future, I will continue to be a self-disciplined person.
Writing 4
（2019湖南省郴州市）.在英语课上, 老师将组织以“说出你的烦恼”(Speak out your worries)为主题的交流活动。
假如你是李华, 请根据以下表格中提供的信息, 用英语写一篇发言稿, 说出你的烦恼和愿望。 Worries too strict, too much homework … little time for outdoor activities… hard to communicate with… …. 要求：
1.短文须包含表格中的所有信息, 并适当发挥；
2.词数：80词左右（短文开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 Hello, everyone,
I am Li Hua. I'd like to speak out my worries and wishes. ____________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
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Wishes less homework… more chances … get on well with … …
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That's all. Thank you. 【参考范文】 Hello, everyone,
I am Li Hua. I'd like to speak out my worries and wishes. My teachers are too strict. They have too much homework to do every day．And I feel stressed too much．I wish I can have less homework. I think my parents are too strict with me．They give us little time for outdoor activities. It's hard for me to communicate with their parents．I wish I can have more chances to play with my friends. I wish I can get on well with my parents.
That's all. Thank you.
主题（三） 实战特训
Writing 5
初中生活即将结束,丰富多彩的学校活动一定给你留下了许多美好的回忆。根据图表提示,选择一次你最喜欢的活动进行描述。
内容包括:1.此次活动的过程; 2.你的收获或感受。
要求:1.词数:80—100。开头已给出,不计入总词数。 2.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
My junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of sweet memories.
NewYear’s party School trip food festival My Junior School Life Soccer game Sports meeting 11
【参考范文】
My junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of sweet memories. Of them, I'd like to share with you my favorite story about our school sport meeting.
we had an exciting sports meeting last month. Many athletes took part in many matches. All the others just watched them. Some were busy writing articles about it. The boys’ relay race was the most exciting games. Everyone cheered for the competitions. They did their best. However,near reaching the finish line ,one of our athletes Tom,Our monitor fell down and hurt his hand . He is the brains of our team. When thinking of losing the game, we were all down and couldn't concentrate on the next match. Our monitor found this and encouraged us to fight on and cheered us up. With the help of our monitor, Then came the girls' relay race. Seeing our monitor waving his injured hand, we made our biggest efforts in the following matches. With the cheers of our classmates, we won the champion. During the celebrations, we threw our monitor into the air.
I would never forget it because I understood the importance of never giving up for the first time.
Writing 6
假设你是李丽,正通过e-mail和美国好友 Jim交流校纪班规,请你用英语向他介绍下面的\"班级公约\"。
班级公约
1.准时到校穿校服,见到老师问声好; 2.上课专心勤思考,作业认真按时交;
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3.有集体荣誉感，积极参加学校组织的各种活动。 4. 每个同学都要爱护班级一切公共财物。 5. 和谐相处应友爱,互相帮助共进步。 要求:1.内容完整,意思清楚,表达通顺,书写规范;
2.请勿逐字翻译,词数100-120左右,不包含已给出的句子的词数。 参考词汇:school uniform; be active in thinking Dear Tim,
I'd like to introduce my class rules made by us all. First, we should It's our duty to follow all the rules above. What about yours? Please write soon. Yours, Li Jie
【参考范文】 Dear Tim,
I'd like to introduce my class rules made by us all. First, we should come to school on time in school uniforms. It's polite to greet our teachers when we meet them. Second, we must listen carefully in class and be active in thinking. Also, we ought to do our homework carefully and hand it in on time. Third, Have a collective sense of honor,Take an active part in various activities organized by the school. Fourth, Each student should take good care of all public property in the class.Last but not least ,being friendly is important.We're supposed to get along well and help each other to make progress together. It's our duty to follow all the rules above. What about yours? Please write soon.
Yours, Li Jie
Writing 7
目前,中学生学习压力大,学习任务重,学生的身体素质越来越差。针对这一现象,你校开展了丰富多彩的
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课外活动。请根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文。 1.你认为开展课外活动有哪些好处? 2.你校课外活动有哪些形式?
3.对你校开展课外活动提出1至2条建议。
注意:1.词数:80词左右。(短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数) 2.文中不得提及具体人名、校名及地名。
Out-of-class activities are very important to us teenagers. 【参考范文】
Out-of-class activities are very important to us teenagers. Doing out-of-class activities every day helps us keep healthy and makes us relaxed. At the same time, through the activities,we can learn many things that we can't get from books.
There are many kinds of out-of-class activities we can do, such as ball games, playing chess,dancing,singing and so on.
Now we students have too much homework to do after school. I hope our teachers will give us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in the activities. I also hope our school can organize more out-of-class activities for us.
主题（四）直击热点
Writing 8
这段时间，受新型冠状病毒肺炎 (NCP: novel coronavirus pneumonia) 爆发的影响，各行各业的人延期复工，学校也推迟开学。居家隔离期间你做了些什么，有什么感想？请以此为话题写一篇英语作文。 要点：
1. 简单地介绍疫情背景； 2. 描述居家隔离期你在干什么；
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3. 谈谈你的感悟。 要求：1. 包含以上要点； 2. 条理清晰，行文流畅； 3. 词数：100~120。
参考单词：隔离isolation 流行性传染病；疫情 epidemic
【参考范文】
A different winter holiday
In the Winter holiday of 2020, a serious disease called NCP broke out all over China and spread rapidly.This is a difficult winter holiday. We have to stay indoors to fight against the coronavirus.
But we can use this period of time to do whatever we like to enrich ourselves. During this period of home isolation,I wanted to improve my violin skills. I decided to spend an hour practicing every day. I thought that keeping up on my hobby would be a good thing to do.Every morning, I spend a couple of minutes listening to the news, especially the news about the coronavirus.It was fun to learn something new during the outbreak. I decided to make a video about NCP.After watching videos about NCP, I learned to protect myself and respect nature. Thanks to/Because of this winter holiday, I’ve learned that when we face difficulties bravely, we can win.
Writin9
2020春节新型冠状病毒施虐全球，可能阻止了我们学生重返校园。但这并没有阻止我们学习。我们中的许多人现在正在家里学习。根据下列导图及要点，写一篇关于studying online首段已给出。 参考词汇：live streaming (直播) and recorded broadcasts (录播). free resources (资源
educational TV channel (频道） a platform平台
educational channel (频道
free resources live streaming (直播) and recorded TV studying online 15
1..学生可以在家上课通过转播画面(直播)和录制的广播(录播)。
2.除了学校的课程之外,学生还可以找到许多免费资源(资源)在线在家自学。 3.1.8亿名学生可以通过云平台继续学习即使学校关闭。
4.在一些农村地区，学生可能没有互联网。但他们可以通过自己的学习教育电视频道 5.一个名为空中教室的平台。它可以为学生提供学习资源和问答服务。 要求：1. 包含以上要点； 2. 条理清晰，行文流畅； 3. 词数：100~120。
The novel coronavirus might have stopped Chinese students from going back to school. But it hasn’t stopped us from learning. Many of us are now studying at home.
【参考范文】
The novel coronavirus might have stopped Chinese students from going back to school. But it hasn’t stopped us from learning. Many of us are now studying at home.
Most schools in China started their new term online on Feb 17. Students can have classes at home through live streaming and recorded broadcasts Besides school courses, students can also find many free resources online to learn by themselves at home. What’s more ,180 million students can keep learning even with schools closed. In some countryside areas, students might not have the internet. But they can learn through their own educational TV channel . Online education companies have also offered help. The company has also helped several schools build a platform called Air Classroom. It can give students free learning resources and question-answering services.
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a platform called Air Classroom. The cloud platform
I believe that we can learn better through various channels。
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