一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析） 1．书面表达
假如你是九年级学生李华，你的美国笔友Billy发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。请你根据以下信息，给Billy回封电子邮件，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。 写作要点：
1. 你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试（physical test）做准备。 2. 介绍你平时锻炼的情况：
（1）每天锻炼的时间：不到一个半小时。 （2）偶尔不锻炼的原因：作业多，没时间。 （3）擅长的体育运动：球类运动。 3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。 写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。 4. 至少80词。 Dear Billy,
It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail.
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___________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua
【答案】Dear Billy,
It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you.
I am busy preparing for the coming physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.
Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，给Billy回封电子邮件，介绍自己平时的锻炼情况，并建议他每周都
要花些时间锻炼身体。 【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I am busy……，because I have……，Doing exercise can help……，So I advise you to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表示很高兴收到Billy的来信，接下来介绍我平时的锻炼情况，最后指出锻炼给我带来的好处以及我建议Billy要多锻炼。此处be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
2．“扬帆起航新学期，学姐学长提建议”。你马上就要毕业了，在初中的学习和生活中你一定有很多收获，请给学弟学妹们提几点建议吧！
要求：1. 内容完整，语言流畅，书写规范清晰。2. 短文中不能出现正式姓名，校名。100 词左右。
【答案】I'm going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.
As old saying goes, \"all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.\" To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.
Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies. Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful school life as well
I hope these suggestions could make your junior school-life more wonderful. 【解析】 【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be going to，graduate from，to begin with，both…and，get along well with others，be active in，as important as，as well等。而To begin with,/ Moreover,/ Last but not least,等短语的运用，既丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，更使短文很有条理，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。 【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
3． 最近一份学生体质健康调查结果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的观点。
现 状 主要原因 大约70%学生眼睛近视 1. 睡眠不足 2. 长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等 1. 做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动 2. 养成正确的用眼习惯 … ….（至少一条） 预防方法 你的观点 参考词汇：近视的 shortsighted 要求：
（1）词数：80～100个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes. Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.
In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.
I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them. 【解析】 【详解】
这是一篇图表作文。根据题干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般现在时写作，人称用第三人称复数和第一人称。内容包括：学生近视原因：1.睡眠不足（not enough）2.长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等（for a long time）防止近视的方法：1.做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动（eye exercises）2.养成正确的用眼习惯（have the good habit of）个人观点：如：我认为，我们应该了解保护眼睛的重要性，尽最大努力保护我们的眼睛。（I think ⋅⋅⋅；try one's best to do sth.）。
常用的重点句型和短语有：sb. spend some time doing sth.，in order to do sth.，try to do sth.，the importance of…等。
4．近来，美国总统特朗普的外孙女由于说一口流利的中文而成为“网红”。你的美国朋友Sam 看过相关报道之后也很想学好中文,但是不知道该怎样做。假如你是大明，请你根据以下提示写一封邮件给他,提一些关于如何学好汉语的建议。 要点提示 :
1.课堂上认真听讲,做好笔记;
2.不要害怕犯错误,与同学们用中文交流;
3.课下经常阅读中文杂志、报纸等,在网上看一些中文语言类节目; 4.经常用中文给外国笔友写电子邮件等。 注意 : 1.词数80-100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息; 4.开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。
Dear Sam ,
I'm happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.
Yours Daming
【答案】Dear Sam,
I'm happy to hear from you.I know you want to learn Chinese well.Here are some suggestions. First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, it's a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don't be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you'd better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write emails to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.
In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.
Yours, Daming
【解析】 【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以大明的身份给Sam写一封信，告诉他如何学好汉语，题目中从四个方面提出了建议。通过审题可知，这是要求写一封建议信，内容应包括以下几个方面：首先应和Sam先做一个交流，然后引出写信的目的；接下来给出具体的建议，依据题目中给出
的这四条，用正确的英语表达出来，还应注意补充一些内容，使文章更加充实；最后写一个适当的结尾，如希望建议对你有帮助等。文章应使用一般现在时，根据表达需要使用恰当的人称。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能按照汉语的思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构考虑，写完整的句子。如可以较常见的主谓宾结构或主系表结构为主，简单句的句型可以使文章叙述清楚、简洁。为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句或复合句以及其他一些复杂句式。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章意思连贯，表达流畅。 【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求给Sam写了一封信，对他的汉语学习提出了一些好的建议。首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有信息。文章主要分成三个部分：第一段是与Sam之间的问候以及引出Sam学习汉语这一话题，并介绍写信的目的；第二段中是提出的具体的建议，这是这篇文章的主体，所在篇幅最大。这一段中使用了First，Second，Third，lastly等词，叙述条理、有层次；最后一段用一句话对整篇文章做了总结。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，句式结构符合英语的表达习惯。语法规范、准确，用词得体。文章中的语句以简单句结构为主，也使用了并列句和复合句，调整了文章的结构。文章中使用了较为丰富的短语和句型，如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it's a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.等等。
5．书面表达
假如你是李明，你的英国笔友Jack来信询问你的家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何。请你按照以下提示给他回一封e-mail。 内容如下：
1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重，去年已发生数次雾霾天气； 2. 人们已经意识到雾霾天气的危害，正在采取各种措施减少其发生； 3. 你在日常生活中打算为此做些什么。 参考词汇：雾霾haze 注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 词数80左右，信件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jack,
I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.
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______________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.
The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .
People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.
As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Ming 【解析】 【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以李明的身份给自己的英国笔友写信，告诉他关于家乡雾霾的情况。题目中列出了三个要点，我们应根据这些要点提示，来组织语言，充实内容。首先介绍去年家乡的雾霾情况严重；然后介绍为减少雾霾人们采取了一些措施；最后介绍一下你自己在日常生活中应该怎么做。因此文章应主要分成三段，一个内容一段。文章内容中叙述的情况不一，时态不能统一，根据表达的需要使用正确的时态，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时，应注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，应从句子的整体考虑，写完整的句子，利用简单句的基本句型，使用恰当的词汇和短语。为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句和复合句；语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达流畅。 【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者根据题目要求介绍了自己家乡治理雾霾的情况，并结合自身的实际情况，讲述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点；且文章结构清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明确，意思表达清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，作者根据表达需要使用了一般过去时、一般将来时态和一般将来时态，动词形式变化准确，语法规范。短文中语言得体，句式表达符合英语的习惯。句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了一些并列句和复合句，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏。短文中较好的句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment.等。
6． “美丽的琼海我的家，人人都要保护她”。自双创以来，我们的生活环境得到了很大的
改观，人人积极参与双创活动，让人点赞的文明行为随处可见。作为一名中学生，请你写一篇短文号召大家加入到双创活动中来。
要求：
1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 2.必须包含所给提示，并做适当的拓展； 3. 行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4. 词数80左右，（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere. As junior high students,
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Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city. 【答案】Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.
As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.
Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city. 【解析】 【详解】
琼海正在进行“双创”活动，即创建文明城市、创建健康城市，城市的生活环境有了很大的
改变。这篇作文要求我们用英语写一篇短文，号召中学生们都参加到“双创”活动中来。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，而是用图表的形式，列出了写作的提纲。通过审题可知，这篇短文我们应从两个方面来叙述：即应该做什么；不应该做什么。根据这个内容，写作时，把短文分成两个层次，这样可以使文章结构清晰、条理。整篇短文应使用一般现在时态，第一人称we来叙述。写作时应注意：首先英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，而应从句子的整体结构考虑，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型，以常见的主谓宾或者主系表构成的简单句为主，穿插使用并列句或者复合句，改变文章节奏，提升文章档次。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、流畅。 【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，向中学生们发出号召，共同参与到城市“双创”活动中来。首先短文的内容完整，文章根据题目中列出的图表，补充了具体的写作内容，从应该做的和不应该做的两个方面，对中学生的日常行为提出了要求。文章条理清晰，有层次。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，语言准确，语句通顺，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句和复合句以及一些较复杂的高级句式，语句之间也使用了较好的连接成分，如We should be polite to others and try to behave well. 、It’s kind of you to help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.等等。
7．书面表达
假设你将代表你校2009届毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言 稿，发言稿的内容要点如下：
回顾美丽的校园、生动有趣的教学、三年来的收获；感谢老师的培养、父母的支持、同 学的帮助；祝愿（考生自拟，至少两点）。
注意：1. 90词左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 发言稿须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；发言稿不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009. Thank you for listening!
【答案】Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009.
It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers' efforts, our parents' support and our classmates' help. At this moment, I would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us. I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future! Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends. Thank you for listening! 【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，根据所给提示用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括回顾美丽的校园、生动有趣的教学、三年来的收获；感谢老师的培养、父母的支持、同学的帮助；祝愿，在写作中适当发挥，语句通顺，符合逻辑，符合发言稿的格式，没有出现自己的真实姓名。
8．2019年2月20日，中央宣传部授予北京榜样优秀群体“时代楷模”称号。时代楷模充分体现“爱国、敬业、诚信、友善”的价值准则。
某网站正在开展以“向时代楷模学习”为主题的英语征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你该怎么做，以及这样做的意义。 提示词语：pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important
提示问题：● What should you do in your daily life? ● Why do you do so? As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models.
【答案】例文
As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful. 【解析】 【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，具体写出怎样做以及这样做的意义。
例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，人称用的是第一人称复数形式，时态主要用的是一般现在时，描述具体怎么做时，描写细致，条理清晰。 高分亮点：
短语：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；more and more beautiful。
句型：By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful；we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。
9．写作
某英文网站的“ Student Life”栏目正在向中学生征文，标题为“ A time when I made someone happy”，请你写一篇英文稿件，内容需包括以下要点: 1. Who was the person you made happy?
2. When was it? 3. What did you say or do? 4. Why did it make him/her happy? 5. How did you feel at that moment?
注意：1．词数：100左右（题目不计入总词数）。 2.文中不得出现可能透考生真实身份的任何信息。
【答案】Last summer,though it was hot,I volunteered to teach children English in rural area.When I arrived there,I couldn't adjust to the weather and life style.However,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great progress.In order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as well.As a result,my English improved a lot.Also,I made friends with some of my students.We are still keeping in touch by letter now. In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that summer.If I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.
【解析】写作分析：这是一篇给定标题的材料作文，需要逐条完成要点问题的回答，描述一次自己让别人开心快乐的经历，是一篇记叙文，首先要读懂5个问题，其次要用恰当的语言和衔接手段把这五个问题的回答联系在一起，变成一篇短文，同时也要注意在描述过去的故事的时候要正确运用过去时态。
写作亮点：既然这是一篇记叙文，就应该完整地呈现故事，需要加上必要的背景，指明时间（Last summer），地点（in rural area），简要概括事件（teach children English），这是文章首句的点睛之笔，信息量丰富。短语和固定搭配的正确使用也为这篇文章增色不少，例如“adjust to…”（调整以适应…），“as time went by”（随着时间的流逝），“made great progress”（取得巨大进步），“keep on learning”（继续学习），“In a word”（总而言之）等等短语使用正确。在收尾部分表达了作者积极的人生态度，表示如果还有机会自己还乐于参与，这样使得这篇文章结构完整，表意更加清晰。
10．近期某英文报纸就“Snowplow Parents（扫雪机式父母）”这一话题展开讨论。“扫雪机式父母”的特征是不惜一切代价为孩子扫除他们生活中遇到的一切障碍，解决一切困难，以便他们可以轻松拥有成功的人生。
请从下表的两种观点中选择一种观点，并结合此观点阐述自己的看法，用英文写一篇短文投稿。
理解 观点 父母出于对孩子的爱才这么做。 自己的看法 不理解 父母控制一切，孩子没有自由。 自己的看法 要求：
1、词数：60-80词。
2、短文应包括所选观点中的要点，可适当发挥。 3、短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文
I really can't understand the snowplow parents.For these parents,they control everything.They clean all the obstacles in children's lives.In this case,they think children have a successful life easily.However,Children have no freedom to do anything.It is the worst thing in their life. In my opinion,parents shouldn't do all the things for children.Because they also need the experiences in their lives.And these experiences play an important role in a successful life.In this way,they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in trouble.Meanwhile,they sometimes can gain friendship and more love in their lives. 【解析】 【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求就“Snowplow Parents（扫雪机式父母）” 这一话题展开讨论，并根据表格中所给出的提示内容选择一种观点，结合此观点阐述自己的看法。在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，然后再动笔写作。
2.例文点评： 本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第三人称，辅以第一人称。文章首先说明不理解扫雪机式父母的原因，接下来说明自己的观点，并阐述自己观点的原因。 3.高分亮点：
短语：in one's lives，in this case，in this way，in trouble。 句型：
高分句型一：In this case，they think children have a successful life easily．In this case在这样的情况下；这句话意为：在这样的情况下，他们认为孩子会更加轻松拥有成功的人生。 高分句型二：they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in trouble. be in trouble 陷入麻烦，这句话意为：当他们陷入麻烦时他们知道他们需要他们自己尽力去解决问题。
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