2013年高考全国卷英语作文
【篇一:2013-2015年高考全国新课标卷 英语作文汇编】
1
(2013新课标i)
假定你是李华。请你给笔友peter写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,带去他想要的那幅中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明:
李明:高个子,戴眼镜
航班号:ca985
到达:8月6日上午11:30
注意:1. 词数100左右
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语和介绍语已为你写好。
dear peter,
looking forward to your reply.
yours,
【参考范文】
dear peter,
how are you doing?
i’m writing to tell you that my uncle li ming is going to your city for a conference, and i’ve asked him to bring you the chinese painting you’ve asked for before.
also, i’d like you to do me a favor. would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is the first visit to the u.s.? thank you in advance!
his flight number is ca985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am. august 6. my uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. and he will be in blue jacket.
looking forward to your reply.
yours,
li hua
2
(2013新课标ii)
假定你是李华,自制了一些中国结 (chinese knot)。给开网店的美国朋友tom写封信,请他代卖,要点包括:
1.外观 (尺寸、颜色、材料);
2.象征意义;
3.价格。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好。
dear tom,
how are you doing?
li hua
one possible version:
dear tom,
how are you doing? i wonder if you could sell some chinese knots for me. i made them myself with red still threads, cloths and other materials. they look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. in china, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. people can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. they are only 12.99 us dollars each. if anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. also, do let me know if you need further information. thank you!
li hua
3
(2014新课标i)
假定你是李华,计划暑假间去英国学习英语,为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意, 请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.参考词汇:住宿accommodation
dear sir/ madam,
yours faithfully,
li hua
【考点】考察应用文(书信)写作
【一句多译】
我是一名来自中国的学生,我计划在假期里到英国参加一个暑期培训班。
(1)i am a student in china and i plan to go to britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.
(2)as a student from china, i plan to go to britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.
【参考范文】
dear sir/ madam,
i am a student in china and i plan to go to britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. i’ve seen your ad, and i’d like to know something more about your six-week english course.
first when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? besides, i wish there would not be too many students in a class. i’d also like to know how much i have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included would there be host family or university dormitory?
i am looking forward to your early reply.
yours faithfully,
li hua
4
(2014全国卷ii)
一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文。
1、 家庭
2、 工作
3、 业余生活
【考点】考察半开放性作文
【一句多译】
我希望我可以在一家电脑公司里做程序设计师。
(1)i hope i will work in a computer company as a program designer.
(2)i hope i will work in a company which produces computer, and i can design some kinds of very good computer。
one possible version
i often imagine what my life will be like in the future. i think my life will be very different in ten years.
i will be twenty-eight years old by then. i will have my own family. probably with a lovely child. i hope i will work in a computer company as a program designer. i will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues, i will do a good job in whatever i do. in my free time, i will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. on my holidays, i will travel around the world. in a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.
【篇二:2013全国卷高考英语作文评分标准】
2013高考英语作文评分标准
1 本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
2 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次 的 要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
3 词数少于 80和多于 120的,从总分中减去2分。
4 评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准 确性、上下文的连贯性。
5 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程 度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。
6 如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。
各档次的给分范围和要求
Ⅰ. 第五档(很好);(21-25分):
完全完成了试题规定的任务
⑴ 覆盖所有内容要点
⑵ 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,
⑶ 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力,
⑷有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑 , 完全达到了预期的写作目的
Ⅱ. 第四档(好):(16-20分)
完全完成了试题规定的任务
⑴虽漏掉1、2个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容
⑵应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求
⑶语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致 ⑷应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑 达到了预期的写作目的
Ⅲ. 第三档(适当):(11-15分)
基本完成了试题规定的任务
⑴虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容
⑵应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求
⑶有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解
⑷应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯 整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的Ⅳ. 第二档(较差):(6-10分)
未恰当完成试题规定的任务
⑴ 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容
⑵语法结构单调、词汇项目有限
⑶ 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解
⑷较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性 信息未能清楚地传达给读者 Ⅴ. 第一档(差):(1-5分)
未完成试题规定的任务
⑴明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求
⑵语法结构单调、词汇项目有限
⑶较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解 ⑷缺乏语句间的连接
成分,内容不连贯 信息未能传达给读者。
Ⅵ. 不得分:(0分) ⑴ 未能传达给读者任何信息:内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
【篇三:2000-2013年全国卷高考英语作文范文】
2000-2013年全国卷高考英语作文范文
2000年高考英语全国卷
假设你是李华,在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨,你的目击一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料,报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。注意:
1、目击者应该准确报告事实;2、词数100左右; 3、结尾已为你写好。
________________________________________________________________________about two
minutes later i stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.
one possible version:
it was 7:15 on the morning of february 8,2000. it was walking along park road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. then i saw a yellow car drive up third street and make a right turn into park road. the next moment the car hit the man while he was crossing the road. he fell with a cry. the car didnt stop but drove off at great speed heading west. i noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was ac864. about two minutes later i stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.
2001年高考英语全国卷
假设你是李华,你的澳大利亚朋友dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担,来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息,写一封回信,谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。
周末活动(减负前)周末活动(减负后)
白天:上课、做作业白天:参观博物馆、学习电脑、绘画
晚上:做作业晚上:看新闻、读书、看报
就寝时间:11:30 就寝时间:10:00 注意:
1、词数100左右; 2、开头已为你写好。
生词:减轻学习负担---reduce learning load
dear dick,
how nice to hear from you again._____________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________ best wishes, li hua
one possible version:
dear dick,
how nice to hear from you again. you want to know what is going on in schools in china? in short, things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load. i don’
t know about others, but i used to have to work even at weekends doing
endless homework and attending
1、不应收门票
2、公园是公众休闲的地方
3、如收票,需建大门、围墙,会影响城市
形象 1、应收门票,但票价不宜高 2、支付园林工人工资 3、购新花木 注意:
1、信的开头已为你写好。 2、词数:100左右。 3、参考词汇:门票:entrance fee
one possible version:
opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. they believed a public park should be free of charge. people need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. what is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.
on the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers and to buy plants and young trees. they suggest, however, fees should be charged low.
yours truly,
li hua
2003年高考英语全国卷
第二节:书面表达:假设你是李华,你的英国笔友bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息(一个卧室、一个洗澡间、一个厨房;卧室里有床、桌子、椅子),写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元,地址在fangcao street,离jianxin chinese school,11路公交车可以直达。
注意:1. 词数:100左右。2. 参考词汇:房租 rent(n.)。
dear bob,
im so glad to learn that youre coming in september. ive found a place for you. its a small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. in the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. the rent is 500 yuan per month. the flat is in a building on fangcao street, which is not far from jianxin chinese school. bus no. 11 can take you straight to the school. in fact, its only one stop. do you think youd like it? if not, i can try and find another place for you.
just let me know.
yours,
li hua
2004年高考英语全国卷i
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
假设你是李华,你在报上看到北京电视台今年七月将举办外国人―学中文,唱中文歌‖才艺大赛。你的美国朋友peter正在北京一所大学学中文,你觉得他应去试一试。请按以下要点给他写信告知此事,并表示可以提供帮助。
比赛时间:7 月18日 。报名时间:截止到6月30日。报名地点:北京电视台 注意:1.词数:100左右 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 3.参考词汇:才艺大赛—talent show
内容要点:1.才艺大赛的内容和对象2.比赛时间3.报名时间和地点4.建议参加,表示可提供帮助
dear peter,
i read in a newspaper today that a ―learn chinese, sing chinese songs‖
foreigners’ talent show will be held in beijing television station on july 18. i know you like singing, and you are in beijing during that period. i think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned chinese. if you would like to try, you have to go to the tv station to sign up before the end of june. if there is anything i can do for you, i would be more than glad to help.
yours,
li hua
2004年高考英语全国卷ii
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
假设你是李华,加拿大一所学校将于今年暑假组织学生来你校访问。其间,andy smith将借住你家。请你代表全家写信给andy,欢迎他的到来,并告知有关事宜。信的要点如下:
1.上午:学校活动2.下午:游览市区3. 晚上:看电视,玩游戏,聊天
注意:1. 词数:100左右2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3. 参考词汇:安排arrange
dear andy,
i am glad to learn that you are coming to china and will stay at my home.
my parents and i are very pleased to have you with us. now let me tell you what we have arranged for you. i know the school will organize a lot of things for you to do in the morning, but in the afternoon, i’ll show you around and take you to some places of interest. we’ll mostly stay at home in the evening watching tv, playing games, and meeting people. i’m sure we’ll have a wonderful time and enjoy each other’s company.
i’m looking forward very much to meeting you soon.
yours sincerely,
li hua
2005年高考英语全国卷i
第二节 书面表达(满分25(分)
假定你是李华,正在英国牛津参加短期语言培训,计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上一则广告引起了你的注意,但一些具体信息不明确(学生是否有优惠价,费用是否包含所有景区的门票、午餐,旅游的日子以及什么时候回来)。请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件,询问有关情况。
注意:1. 词数100左右,信的格式已为你写好。2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇:牛津—oxford 费用—fee
dear sir/madame,
i’m writing for more information about the day tour to london.
as a student at oxford university, i’d like to know if you have any special price for students. as for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? what about lunch? is it included? or do i need to bring
along my own food?
how long will the tour last? since i need to prepare my lessons for the next day, i’d like to know the time to return. besides, is there any time for shopping? i really want to have a look at the big stores in london.
yours,
li hua
2005年高考英语全国卷ii
书面表达(满分30分)
假设你是李华,最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信,反映讨论结果。
赞成迁出: 1. 游客多,交通堵塞2. 郊区环境好。 反对迁出:1. 建于1906年,中外闻名2. 搬迁易造成动物死亡
注意:1. 词数100字左右,信的开头已为你写好。2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇: 郊区—suburb
june 3, 2005
dear editor,
recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether the beijing zoo should be moved out of the city. some of my classmates are in favor of the move. they say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams. they also say that once moved, animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs. however, other students are against the idea, saying that the beijing zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and is well–known at home and abroad. so it should remain where it is. what’s more, moving may cause the death of some animals. whether to move or not, this is a big decision which has to be made by people in beijing.
yours truly,
li hua
2006年高考英语全国卷i
假定你是李华。应英国朋友bob的要求, 写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。
注意:1、字数100左右2、可以适当增减细节,以使行文连贯3、开头语已为你写好
(注:上面的小字是:借阅须知:每人每次5本,借期10天。下面的小字是:开放时间:周一至周五,早9:00至晚7:00,周末馆。)
例文:
dear bob,
of the school. there is a beautiful garden in front of it and our classroom building is right behind it. the library is big. when you get inside, you will see many shelves full of books on different subjects. there are also lots of newspapers and magazines. we borrow books and do some reading in the library. according to the rule, every student can borrow up to 5 books each time and keep them for 10 days. it is open from 9 am to 7 pm from monday to friday and closed on weekends. we all like our library very much.
best wishes,
li hua
2006年高考英语全国卷ii
假定你是李华,亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办,现正在招募志愿者,你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括:1.个人情况:年龄,性别,学历 2.个人条件:英语好,爱好体育,善于交际,乐于助人,熟悉本地情况 3.承诺:提供最佳服务
注意:词数100左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
dear sir / madam:
i was quite excited when i heard the asian winter games will be held in the city i live. my name is li hua. i am an 18-year-old boy student in asenior middle school. and i want to be a volunteer for the games. i like
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