上海中考英语作文总分为20分，其中内容分8分、语言分8分、组织结构分4分。以下为上海中考英语作文官方评分标准：1.内容分8分。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚完整。2.语言分8分。学生需用语规范，表达准确，无或少见语法错误，词汇拼写正确，句型使用恰当。首先是字数，少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。3.组织结构分4分，也就是我们常说的文采分。根据学生使用复杂句型/单词和谚语/俗语的情况来加分。二.注意点：
每少5个词扣0.5分，拼写错误每处扣0.5分，标点，大小写错误每2处扣0.5分3内容和语言表达总分达15分及以上，得2~3分内容和语言总分13~14分，如确有好句型或表达用语，可酌情给1~2分通篇句型，句式单一，词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，也不给分开头句+给的几个参考点+结尾句+亮点。先划档次：A档18~15分B档14.5~12分C档11.5~8分D档3.5~0分然后再仔细批阅看有否语法错误,最后给出总分。第1页共34页7三.学生常出现的问题：
1.内容空洞，没有清晰的思路，表达能力不强，总是用一些不合适的句子内容来表达，所以可能让老师觉得理由或是内容太假，当然也就得不了高分。2.议论过多，描写不足。大多数情况下，我们把议论当成的作文的重点，所以常常会跑题。应当多描述提示的内容或加以想像，不能只翻译了事。3.总是使用同一个主语写句子，重复太多。尽量使用不同的主语来表达，比如：ImustlearnEnglishwell.就可以换成：ItisimportantformetolearnEnglishwell.4.结构散漫，想哪儿写哪儿，乱七八糟。应该使用总分或总分总的结构。5.都是简单句，缺少复合句。多用状语从句，宾语从句，定语从句及一些重要的句型，也人教版新目标初二下英语同步辅导（一）初中二年级下un...初中二年级下Un...可以用用被动语态。6.连词的使用较少，句子之间的连接很生硬。可以加入一些：比如:tomysurprise(让我惊讶的是),what’smore（而且，还有）等，让上文与下文衔接更紧密。意思也能更流畅地表达。四．中考写作高频使用词组、句法
1.作文开头的有用句Asweallknow,Asitisknowntoall,It’sknowntoallthat…It’scommonknowledgethat…It’scommonlyacceptedthat…Thereisnodenyingthat…Howtimeflies!Inablinkofaneye,Timeflieslikeaspeedingarrow,Timegoesliketheflowingwater.2、中间分层部分的有用结构:分正反两面论述:Ononehand,Ontheotherhand分两点：Foronething,Foranother,分三点：Firstly,Secondly,Lastbutnotleast3、结尾部分Allinall,Inaword,Inconclusion,Inbrief,Inshort,Toputeverythinginashell,概括的说，简单的说Lastbutnotleast第2页共34页7组织语言发表观点的Inmyopinion,Frommypointofview,Inmyeyes,AsfarasIamconcerned,Believeitornot,表示递进的InadditionFurthermoreMoreimportantlyWhat’smoreMoreover其他与“我”有关的写作材料1、重点句型It`s+a.forsb.todosth.So+a./ad.Thatsucha+a.+n.thattoo…todoNot….untilThat’swhy+句子那是。。。的原因It’ssaidthat+句子There’snodoubtthat+句子毫无疑问···Itgoeswithoutsayingthat+句子毫无疑问···There’snoneedtodo没必要做···There’snopointindoing做某事毫无意义2、提建议Hadbetterdo/notdoHow/whataboutdoingWhynotdo/whydon`t+句子IthinkyoushoulddoIsuggestthatyoushoulddoIfIwereyou,Iwoulddo我要是你的话，我会做```It’sbesttodo3、表示喜欢，感兴趣Like/love/enjoydoingBefondof/bekeenonsth.PrefertodoAratherthandoBBeinterestedindoing=show/takegreatinterestin4、努力做```Trytodo/strivetodoMakeeffortstodo=makeeveryefforttodoTryone’sbest/doone’sbesttodoDowhat/everythingsbcantodo5、打算做···/计划做···Intendtodo/plantodoBegoingtodoDecidetodoDeterminetodo=bedeterminetodoMakeupone’smindtodo6、表示想/希望Wanttodo=wouldliketodoHopetodoExpecttodoWishtodoConsiderdoing7、其他有用的短语Fromnowon/soonerorlater/inthenearfutureHavepositiveattitude第3页共34页7towards/enrichmyknowledge/learn…byheart/Meetwithvariouskindsofdifficulties/facedifficultiesbravely/overcomethedifficultiesPlayanimportantrole/partin….8、其他有用的句式Forthereasonabove,/Afterall/Asforme,/Franklyspeaking/Generallyspeaking/Believeitornot,/AsaGradeNinestudent,/Thereasonsareasfollows,People’sviewon…varyfrompersontoperson4、增添亮点使用复合句和谚语谚语举例Ifirmlybelievethat“Aforeignlanguageisaweaponinthestruggleoflife”.Asafamoussayinggoes,“Amanbecomeslearnedbyaskingquestions.”It’scommonknowledgethattheroadtosuccessisnotalwaysfullofroses.Anoldsayinggoes,“Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart.”五．2002-2017上海中考英语作文题目集锦
2002Myfavoritething(s)我的心爱之物2003TobealovelyShanghainese做一个可爱的上海人2004LeaveSchool毕业时分2005Growingpainsandgains成长的烦恼2006Ihaveadream我有一个梦2007AStoryaboutMyParent(s)一个关于我父/母的故事2008LoveAroundMe爱在我身边2009Iwanttodosomethingformyschool
我想为我的学校做点什么2010I'mproudofmyself
我为我自己感到自豪2011MyFavouriteThing（s）
我的心爱之物
第4页共34页72012IfyouareJoe.yourfriendBettyisupsetbecauseshecarestoomuchaboutthe
result.
写给一个考试焦虑考生的一封信，并给予建议。
2013Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Howtoprotectmyself”．
(以“如何保护自己”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文)2014Thistimenextyear明年此时
2015Iwanttoinvent________________（我想要发明）2016I'amready__________.2017Thereisalwayshope
六．近5年上海中考英语真题范文分享
2009命题作文
Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”.(以“我想为学校做件事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)Usethefollowingpointsasareference.(以下内容仅供参考)lWhatdoyouwanttodoforyourschool?2Whydoyouwanttodoit?3Howareyougoingtodoit?例文1：Iwanttomakeschoolclean.Youmaythinkitisverysimple.ButIdon'tthinkso.Ourteachersaid,\"Schoolisyourhome,youshouldkeepitclean.\"ButIhaveneverdoneanythingtomakeschoolclean.Forexample,Ihavenevertoldmyclassmatetopickuprubbishafterhethrewitonthe第5页共34页7ground.Ialsothrewtherubbishontheground.SoIwanttomakeschoolcleansothateveryonecanforgiveme.Duringthissummerholiday,Iwillgotoschooltomakeschoolclean.Ofcourse,Iwilldoitwithmyclassmates.Wewillmakeschoolcleaneveryweekendsnexttermaswell.Now,doyouthinkitissimple?2OnepossibleversionIwanttodosomethingformyschoolI'mleavingmyschool.Iwanttoplantatreeinmyschoolgarden.Ihavefoundtherearetoomanybuildingsandfewtreesinourschoolyard,soIwanttomakemyschoolmuchgreenerandmorebeautiful.IfIplantatreethere,maybemoreandmorestudentswilldoasme.Intheirsparetime,thestudentscanreadunderthetrees.2010命题作文
上海中考英语作文题:I'mproudofmyself1、Whatkindofpersonareyou?2、Whatmakesyouproudofyourself(Giveanexample/examples)3、Whyareyouproudofyourself?要求：至少60字范文：1Iamaboyoflessconfidence.Ialwayshaterunning.Butasweallknow,thestudentsofGradeninehavetotakepartinthesportsexam.Atthatmoment,Ijustwantedtogiveup.Butmyparentsencouragedme:\"impossibleisnothing,\"\"youcouldchallengeyourself!\"sowiththeencouragementofthem,Itriedmybesttorunandinsistedonrunning.WhenIgottothefinishingline,Ifeltproudofmyself,thoughIdidn'tgetthegoodmark,Iknew,Iwon.IcreatedamiracleformyselfandIwassoproudofmyself!2.IamproudofmyselfThewheeloflifehasrolledfastthroughthepastfifteenyears.Bylookingbackwards,I’msoproudofmyselfbecauseI’vegrownintoastrong-mindedperson.Itwasthefirsttimeformetoclimbahighmountainalone.Atfirst,Ifeltmybodywasfilledwithenergy.Astimewentby,第6页共34页7tirednessmademystepslowdown.Formanytimes,theideaofgivingupthejourneyappearedinmymind.Butthesaying“Accumulatedwaterbecomesariver.”enabledmetomoveon.Thoughthepowerofonestepseemedsoweak,Iinsistedonclimbingtothetop.WhenIsucceeded,IfeltIhadreachedanewheightinmylife.HowproudI’mofbeingastrong-mindedperson.3.IamproudofmyselfIusedtobeagirlwithfewwords.LastmonthIfailedintheexam.IfeltsodepressedthatIcouldn’thelpcrying.However,mymothertoldme,“Thelifeisatoughroadfullofupsanddowns.Everyonehastoexperiencethelowtimes.”Herencouragingwordsliftedmeup.Imadeupmymindtoprepareforthenextexam.Ialwayslistenedtotheteachercarefullyanddidmyhomeworkattentively.Tomysurprise,Iachievedthebestgradeintheexam.Atthattime,Iactuallyfeltproudofmyself.I’mproudbecauseIachievedsuccessaswellascourage.NowI’mmoreactivethanbefore,andIalwaysbelieveaslongasyoukeepyourheartfacingthesun,theworldwillalwaysbringyounewhopes.2011话题补全式作文
Writing(作文)共18分
Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“I’mamemberof“(以“我是……的一员”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格子”提示：你可以作为任意兴趣小组或者社团的一员，或者作为家庭，班级，社区额的一员，写出你的经历，感受等。UsethefollowingpointsasareferenceAreyougladtobeamemberof……？Whatdoyoudoinit?Howdoyoufeelassuchamember?例文：1I’maMemberoftheSingingandDancingClubHello,everyone!I’mverygladtobeamemberof第7页共34页7theSingingandDancingClub.Ihavebeeninthisclubfor2years.I’manactorintheclub.Ilikesinginganddancingverymuch.Isinganddancewithmyclassmatesonweekends.ThoughIamverytired,Iliketosinganddanceeveryday.Itmakesmefeelveryhappy.2Inthisworld,everyfamilyhasamother,afather,adaughterorason.Forplentyofpeople,familiesareveryimportant.whenyouareverysaid,youcanfoundoneortwopersonstomakeyoufeelhappiness,thisisyoufamily.Iamverygoldtobecomemyfamilymember,becauseIhaveaprettygoodparentandafairlyyoungerbrother.WhenIcomeback,Ialwaysfeelfreedomandrelaxed.Mymotherisakindcook;shehaslotsofexperienceincooking,somybrotherandIarehealthy.Asadaughter，Ishouldn'tmakemyparentsworry.Asasister,lshouldlookaftermybrother.lwanttobeagreatmemberofmyfamily,lwouldtrymybesttodowhatlshoulddointhefamily2012书信类作文
Writing(作文):(共20分)Writealetterinatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation(根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的信)SupposeyouareJoe.YourfriendBettyisupsetaboutacomingexamforshecarestoomuchabouttheresult.Whatdoyouthink?Trytoofferhersomeadvice.(假设你是Joe，你的好朋友Betty因为过于在意考试结果而感到焦虑。请给他写一封信，谈谈你的看法，并给她一些建议。)例文：1Knowingthatyoucaretoomuchabouttheresult,Iamquiteworried.Actually,itisnousebeingupsetdespitetheimportanceoftheresult.Therearesomeeffectivewaystocalmdown.Aboveall,keepingremindingyourselftostayinpeaceisthemosthelpful.Besides,itwillhelpyoutorelaxifyousparesometimeforrecreationalactivitieslikesports.Finally,talktoyourparentsandfriends,whoarealwaysreadytocomfortyou.AsissaidbySteveJobs,“thejourneyisthereward.”Iam第8页共34页7sureyouwillgetthroughthissituation.2.DearBetty,Howtimeflies!Theexamisfinallynearathand.Importantasitistoyou,youreallyshouldn'tcaretoomuchabouttheresultandgetyourselfoverlyupset.Rememberallthehardworkyouhaveputin!Aslongasyougowithacalmmindandapositiveattitude,I'msuretherewillbenothingdifficultforyouandtheexamwillbesmoothsailing.Isuggestyoutalkmoretoparentsandteachersaboutyouranxietyandtakebettercareofyourhealthsuchasgettingenoughsleepanddoingmoreexercise.Aboveall,nomatterwhattheresult,allyouneedtodoistoactmoreandthinklessbecauseactionisworry'sworstenemy.Keepfaithandcalmdown,andyouaresuretocomeoutwithflyingcolors.Allthebestofluck.Yours,Joe2013自由命题类作文
Writing(作文)(共20分)99．Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Howtoprotectmyself”．(以“如何保护自己”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)提示：自我保护是青少年需要掌握的重要技能。请谈谈你在生活中怎样进行自我保护(可结合生活中的某一个情景或具体事例，如：面对灾难如何自救，如何预防受骗或侵害，如何避免生活中的意外，等等)。Phrasesforreference(以下短语仅供参考)：Ask…forhelpcalmdownindangerprevent．．．from(注意：文中不得出现具体人名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分)范文1Asastudent,Ithinkitimportantformetoprotectmyselffromdangeroussituations.Firstofall,I第9页共34页7mustcalmdownassoonaspossible,forpanickingisofnohelp.Then,asisknowtoall,calling119immediatelyisthemosteffectivewaytosavemyself.Aswellasthat,itisbesttotakethestairsinsteadofelevators.INconclusion,withpositiveattitudeandsufficientpreparations,Iwillbeabletoprotectmyselffromfires.2：HowtoprotectmyselfEveryoneinmyfamilywasawakedbytheunusualshaking.Thefirstwordthatcametomymindwasearthquake.WhenIlookedoutsideofthewindow,Ifoundeveryonerunninghereandthere,andIcouldheartheshoutingfromtheneighbors.DespitethefactthatIwasindanger,Itoldmyselftocalmdownandthinkaboutthewaystoprotectmyselfinanearthquake.Ishouldgetoutsideinsteadofhidinginsidethebuilding.Icouldn’ttaketheliftbutwalkdownstairs.NosoonerhadIgotoutsidethanIaskedthepoliceforhelp.AndIshouldalwaysbeawareoftheunexpecteddropoverhead.Followingtheseways,Imanagedtopreventmyselffrombeinghurt,andsurvivedtheearthquake.Ibelievethattheseareusefulwaystoprotectmyselfinanearthquake.3：AterriblefireinJilintookmanypeople’slivesrecentlyandbroughtendlesspainstoalargenumberoffamilies.SoifIwerecausedinafire,Iwouldtrymybesttoprotectmyself.First,Iwouldstaycalm.Acoolheadcanpreventmefromtakingrashactionsandhelptopickoutarightsolutionthefirsttime.Then,Iwouldcall119withmyexactlocationandthesituationthen.Mostimportantly,Iwouldcovermyselfwithwetclothesandmademywaytothesecurechannelinsteadofjumpingoutofthewindows.Withabovetips,Iwillsurelybeabletoprotectmyselffromfires.第10页共34页7七．热点话题背诵篇目
关于上海的变化1.GreatchangesinShanghaiWiththedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinShanghai.Manyyearsago,thereusedtobenarrowbridges,roadsandhousesinShanghai.Butnow,wecanfindbigbridges,wideroadsaswellashighbuildingseverywhere.PeopleliveinShanghaiusedtoliveinsmallhousesinnarrowstreets,butnowmostofthemarelivinginbigandcomfortableapartments.What’smore,wecanseegrass,lakesandparkshereandthere.Toourgreatjoy,the2010WorldExpowillbeheldinShanghaiaswell.Asashanghainese,Iampoundofallthesechanges.WearesureShanghaiwillhaveabrightfuture.关于学校生活2.OurschoollifeOurschoollifeisverycolorful.Theyaremanyhobbygroupsinourschool,suchassinginggroup,dancinggroup,sciencegroupandsoon.Wecanlearnalotbyjoiningthesegroups.Forexample,weholdaSingingFestivalinMay.Wecanenjoyourselvesbysinging.It’ssointerestingthateveryonelikesitverymuch.WealsohaveasportsmeetinginOctober.Italwaysmakesusexcited.Sometimesweevenhavefriendlymatcheswithotherschools.Whatanenjoyableschoollifewehave!关于网上购物3.ShoppignontheinternetNowadays，shoppingontheinternethasbecomeanewwayofshopping.Indeed，itofferspeoplealotofadvantages.SoIprefertodosomeshoppingontheinternet.Foronething,itisconvenientbecausetheonlineshopsareopen24hoursadayandwedon’thavetoqueue.Fortheotherthing,itisoftencheapertobuygoodsontheInternetanditisalsoeasytofindoutwhatwewant.Additionally，wecansavealotoftime.Isn’titgreattodoshoppingontheInternet?第11页共34页7关于学习4.MywayofLearningEnglishAsweallknow,Englishisoneofthemostimportantlanguageintheworld.Soit’simportantforustolearnit.Thenhowcanweitwell？Inmyopinion,thebestwaytolearnEnglishistodomorelistening,speaking,readingandwriting.What’smore,weshouldpracticetheseskillseveryday.Ofcourse,interestisthebestteacher.Themorewelearn,themoreinterestingandhelpfulwe’llfindEnglish.Asthesayinggoes,”Practicemakesperfect.’’关于节日5.TheSpringFestivalAsweallknow,theSpringFestivalisthemostimportantfestivalinChina.OntheNewYear’sEve,familiesalwaysgettogetherandhaveabigdinner.Manypeopleliketosetofffirecracker.Peoplealsoeatdumping---akindoftraditionalChinesefood.Especially,childrenlikethefestivalverymuchbecausetheycannitonlyhavedeliciousfood,wearnewclothesbutalsoreceiveredpacketsfromtheirparentsortheirelders.Itissaidthatthemoneyintheredpacketswillbringchildrengoodluck.Chinesepeoplehaveagoodtimeduringthefestival.关于保护环境6.EnvironmentaroundusTheenvironmentisveryimportanttous.Weneedthefreshair,thecleanwaterandsoon.Thereusedtobemanytreesaroundus,theairwasfreshandtheriverwasclean.Butnow,peoplecutdowntoomanytreesandtheenvironmentaroundusbecomesworseandworse.Soasstudents,weshouldtrytoprotectourenvironment.Firstofall,weshouldplantasmanytreesaspossible.Second,weshouldridebikesorwalktoschoolinsteadoftakingbusesorcars.Third,weshouldn’t’tuseplasticbags.Inaword,ifeveryoneknowstheimportanceofenvironmentprotection,we’llhaveagreenworld.关于电脑7.MyviewoncomputerWiththedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,computersareplayingmoreandmoreimportantrolesinourdailylife.Theycandomostofthethingspeoplecando.Byusingcomputers,wecangainhugeamountofknowledgeandinformation,especially,computershave第12页共34页7madethecommunicationwithourfriendsandrelativesmoreconvenientandeasier.Butsomestudentsaresokeenonplayinggamesonlinethattheyevendon’twanttogotoschool.Idon'tthinkitisright.Inmyopinion,weshouldmakegooduseotcomputers.关于出国8.IsithelpingtostudyabroadInrecentyears,moreandmorestudentsinChinagoabroadfortheirfurtherstudies.MostChinesepeoplethinkitishelpfultostoryabroad.ButIdon’tthinkso.ForoneTOEFLorGRE,andthiswillsurelywasteusplentyofmoneyandtime.Inaddition,ifwestudyhome,wecanstaywithourfamilyandfriends,andwecanstudyinamorefriendlyenvironmentInaword,Iprefertostudyhome.关注时事H1N1流感★范文01.根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文.所给英文提示词语供选用.请不要写出你的校名和姓名.世界上已有许多国家发现了新型H1N1流感病毒(H1N1fluvirus)病例.据了解，人感染该病毒后会出现咳嗽、发烧、疲劳等症状.为了加强同学们的预防意识，(21世纪中学生英语报>正在举办征文活动，请你给该报投稿，描述感染该病毒的症状并谈一谈为了预防该病毒我们该怎么做，最后表达我们能战胜病毒的信心.提示词：cough,haveafever,feeltired,prevent,wash,exercise,sleep,believeNowadays,manycountriesintheworldhavefoundcasesofthenewH1N1fluvirus.It‟ssaidthatpeoplewithH1N1fluviruswillcough,haveafeverandfeeltired.Topreventthevirus,wecandomanythings.Firstly,we‟dbetternotgotoplaceswheretherearemanypeople.Secondly,weneedtowashourhandsoftenwithsoapandwater,especiallyafterwecoughorsneeze.It'salsoagoodhabitforustoexerciseregularly.Itcannotonlyhelpuskeepfitbutalsoimproveourhealthagainstillness.Andhavingagoodsleepisimportant,too.Peoplewhoaretiredorunderstresscangetsickeasily.Andthen,eatmorefruitandvegetabletokeepourselvesfitandstrong.Lastbutnotleast,openthewindowandkeeptheairintheroomfresh.Ifwealldothesethings,wewillpreventthevirus.Sothereisnoneedtobeworried.Ibelievewewillwinthroughintheend.第13页共34页7★范文02.★上海世博会对中国的影响Asweallknowthat2010WorldExpowillbeheldinShanghai,thisisthefirsttimethatChinahostedtheWorldExpo.TheWorldExpohasalonghistorybutithasneverbeenheldinAsia.Soitisagreathonorforourcountry.ItisalsoagreathonorforalltheAsians.Asahostcity,Shanghaiwillhavemorechancestodevelopquickly.ThethemeoftheExpois\"BetterCity,BetterLife\".WeallreallyhopethatShanghaiwillbecomemoreexcitingandattractiveandthatwecanenjoylifetothefullest.Organizersexpectedtoattract70millionvisitorsfromallovertheworldtoattend,atthesametimeitisalsothelargestinthehistoryofWorldExpo.ItisagoodchanceforChinatoshowitsachievementsinmanyfields.★范文04.HowtoSurviveanEarthquakeIfearthquakehappened,firstly,don'tpanicandcalmdown.Secondly,findsomesafeplacetostayanddon'truninsuchahurry.Ifintheroom,oneshouldhidehimself/herselfundersomethinghard,suchasdesk,tableorevenbedandkeepawayfromshelfandcupboard,andnevertakealifttogodownstairs.Ifintheopenair,findanopenplaceandnevergetclosetocarsorwaterside.Thirdly,weshouldhelpeachotherwhenwemeettrouble.Atlast,nomatterhowstrongtheearthquakeis,ifonlywehavethebelieftodefeatitandnevergiveup,wemustbeabletoovercomeanydifficulties.二、环保问题★范文05.环境问题今天环境变得越来越糟糕,环境问题影响着人们的工作,学习,生活等,而我们的工作,生活,生产等又使环境污染越来越严重……,如何保护我们的环境?请以“Howtoprotectourenvironment?”为题写一篇短文。提示:存在问题:1.水污染越来越严重；2.砍伐森林严重；3.大气污染严重；4.白色垃圾等。要求：如何改善/保护环境?至少：3至4个方面。Howtoprotect/saveourenvironment/world?Asweallknow,theenvironmentaroundusisgettingworseandworse/moreandmoreseriouslytoday.Waterispolluted;wehavenoclean第14页共34页7watertodrink.Manytreesarecuttingdown;someanimalsaregettinglessandless.Somefactoriesarepouringdirtyairintothesky.Thepopulationisincreasingfasterandfaster,resourcesaregettinglessandless…etc.Notonlydoesitaffectourlivesandhealth,italsohasagreataffectioninthefuture.People‟shealthhasbeengreatlyaffectedbyair,noiseandwaterpollution.Manypeoplediedofdiseases.Inordertoliveabetterlife,somethingmustbedonetostopthepollution.It‟sourdutytoprotectourenvironment.Weshouldn’tthrowawayrubbisheverywhere.Treesareveryhelpfulandimportantforus.Weshouldplantmoreandmoretreesinordertolivebetterandhealthierinthefuture.Ifeveryonemakescontributiontoprotectingtheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.Inaword,ifeveryonepaysmoreattentiontoourenvironment,therewillbelesspollutionandourlifewillbebetter.“Thereisonlyoneearth”,Ihopeeveryonewillprotectourenvironmentwell.限塑令★范文06.有关限塑令问题根据国务院发布的\"限塑令\"，自2008年6月1日起，在所有超市、商场实行塑料购物袋有偿使用制度，超市、商场一律不得免费提供塑料购物袋。请你写一篇英语短文，要求包括以下内容：现状：目前中国每天消费近30亿个塑料袋，造成了严重的资源浪费和环境污染；限塑令的意义：减少塑料袋使用量，提高公众的环保意识；提倡：重拎布袋子，重提菜篮子。参考词汇：禁令ban意识awareness提倡advocateTheproblemof\"whitepollution\"causedbyusedplasticisbecomingincreasinglyserious,inwhichplasticshoppingbagsplayanimportantrole.InChinaaboutthreebillionplasticshoppingbagsareconsumedeveryday,whichresultsinagreatwasteofresourcesandheavyenvironmentalpollution.Luckily,thegovernmenthasputanationwidebanontheuseoffreeplasticbags,demandingthatallstoresandsupermarketsnotprovidecustomerswithfreeplasticbagsafterJune1.Iagreewiththerule,whichpeoplecan‟tgetthefreeplasticbagsintheshops,supermarkets.Itadvocatespeopletousetheirclothbagsandbaskets.It‟sgoodforourenvironment.SoIhopeallthestudentsinourclassstopusingtheplasticbags,andtouseourownclothbags.Ihopewecan第15页共34页7takecareofourenvironment.Let‟smakeourworldmoreandmorebeautiful.★范文07.节约水是我们每个人的责任Asweknow,waterisveryimportanttoman,wecan‟tlivewithoutwater.Theamountofwaterwhichissuitabletodrinkislessandless.Butsomepeopledon‟tcareaboutit.Theywastealotofwaterintheirdailylife.Evenworse,theypourdirtywaterintorivers.Theythrowrubbishintorivers,too.Manyriversandlakesareseriouslypolluted.Somethingmustbedonetostopthepollution.AndIthinkit‟sagreatshametowastewhilemillionsareingreatneedofwater.Ithinkwhatwecandoisthatwehavetosaveeverydropofwateraspossibleaswecan.Forexample,wemustturnoffthetapimmediatelyafterweuseit.Wecanuseabasintowashourhandsandfaces.It‟salsoagoodideatoencouragemyfriendsandfamilymemberstojoinme!Onlyinthiswaycanwelivehappily.Ifwedon‟tsavewater,thelastdropofwaterwillbeatear-dropofus.Ibelieveifeveryonemakesalittleeffort,wecanmakeabigdifference.第16页共34页7低碳生活★范文08.现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生活”（low-carbonlife），即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式。低碳生活对我们大家都有好处，请你写一篇短文向一家英文报社投稿。内容包括：你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。提示词语：begoodfor,everyone,rideabike,think,makeadifference,environment,suggest,reuseLow-carbonlifeisgoodforeveryone.Tohelpwiththeenvironment,Ialwayswalkorrideabiketoschoolinsteadoftakingacar.Besides,IwilltrytousethingsthatcanberecycledandIneverforgettoturnoffthelightswhenIleavetheclassroom.Ithinkit‟smydutytolivealow-carbonlife.Andeventhesimplestactivitiescanmakearealdifferencetotheenvironment.SoIsuggestweshouldreusebooksaslongaspossible.Andwe‟dbetternotspendmuchmoneyonexpensiveclothes.Ifeveryonedoessomethingfortheenvironment,Ibelievetheearthwillbeabetterplace.提出建议学习★范文09.根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信，信的开头和结尾已经给出，其字数不计入所完成的回信内。假如你叫ZhangFang，是美国中学生Lucy的笔友，你收到了她的电子邮件。请根据她来信的内5容写一封回信。针对她的困惑，谈谈你的看法，同时提出一些建议，并表达对她的祝愿。1、DearZhangFang,Ihavebeeninthisschoolfortwoyears.Myschool‟snottoobad.ButIhaven’tgotusedtoit.Someoftheteachersareverygood,especiallymyscienceteachers.Theytrytomakelessonsinteresting.Iliketohavetheirclassesandspendmuchtimeonit.SoIusuallygetAinscienceexams.ButIdon‟tlikehavingEnglishandhistoryclasses.Therearetoomanythingstomemorizeandthey’resoboring.Besides,itseemsthattheteacherscanonlyreadagainand第17页共34页7again.Theydon‟ttrytomakelessonsinteresting.Wheneverthelessonsstart,Ifeelsleepy.IoftengetCintheexams,sometimesD.Thefinalexamofthistermiscoming.WhatshallIdo?Couldyougivemesomeadvice?Yours，LucyDearLucy,/2、I’mveryhappytohearfromyou.Don’tworrytoomuch.Manystudentshavethesameproblemlikeyou.Ithinkit‟sverycommonforstudentstodislikememorizing.Here’smyadvice.ButinfactEnglishandhistoryarenotasboringasyouthink.Ifyoutrythefollowingthings,youmayfindtheyareinterestingandyouwillnotfeelsleepyinclassagain.Firstyouhadbetterlearnthenewlessonsbyyourselfandwritedownthedifficultpointsbeforelessons.Itcanmakeyoubecomeinterestedinwhattheteacherssayinclass.Secondyoushouldlistencarefullyandtrytoanswertheteachers‟questions.Itcanhelpyouunderstandbetterandmemorizemorequickly.What‟smore,youalsoneedtoreviewthelessonsregularlyafterclass.Ifyoustillfeelunhappy,youcanhaveatalkwithyourteachertoaskforhelp.IreallyhopemyadvicecanhelpyououtandgetAinEnglishandhistoryexams.Keeptrying,Ibelieveyouwillenjoytheschoollifeandmakegreatprogresswithyourstudy.Yours,ZhangFang.生活★范文10.假如你是韩梅，下面是一封你的笔友Alice给你发来的e-mail,请根据e-mail的内容，给他写一封回信。与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。提示词语：listento,mother’slove,careabout,communicatewith,getalongwith,smileDearHanMei,I’mafraidI’vegotabigproblemrecently.Mymothertalkstoomuchtome.Shealwaystellsme,“Becarefulwhilecrossingthestreet.”“Putonmoreclothes.”“Didyoudoagoodjobatschool?”Andsoon.I’mannoyed(烦恼).WhatshallIdo?Canyougivemesomeideas?第18页共34页7AliceDearAlice,asateenager,Imetthesameproblemasyou.ButnowIcangeton/alongbetterwithmymother.Herearesomeideasforyou.Yourmothertalksmuch,becauseshecaresaboutyou.I'msureyourmumlovesyouverymuch.Maybeitshowsyourmother‟slove.SoIthinkyoushouldlistentoher.Ifyouropinionsaredifferentfromyourmother‟s,youcancommunicatewithher,andtellherwhatyou‟rethinkingabout.Ifyourmotherdoesn’ttakeyouradvice,justkeepsilentandgiveherasmile.IhopewhatIsayherecanhelpyoualot.HanMei娱乐★范文11.根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信。（信的开头和结尾已给出，其字数不计入所完成的回信内）。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。75.中学生学习时间长、大力大，专家建议学生每天课后应采取适当的方式放松自己。为此，不同的同学有不同的放松方式，有的爱看电视，有的听音乐，有的做运动…请你谈谈你通过哪些方式放松自己并说说原因，谈谈你的感受。提示词语：relax,TV,music,thinkTheSeniorHighSchoolEntranceExaminationiscoming.InordertomakeasuccessintheexamIthinkit’shightimeforustorelaxalittle.Orwe’llbetoonervoustoworkwellintheexam.Inordertorelaxourselves,wecanturntosomeofourhobbies,differentstudentshavedifferentways---SomewatchTV,somelistentomusic…ButformeIenjoytakingexercisemost.WheneverIfeeltired,Ialwaysspendanhour(in)walkingorjogginginthepark.Besides,Ialsoplaytabletenniswithmyfriendsafterclass.Inmyopinion,takingexercisecannotonlyrestourbrainsandeyesbutalsohelpbuildourbodies.Ithinkit‟sreallyhelpfultobothmyhealthandmystudy.Ihopeallofmyclassmatescanjoinmeingettingrelaxed.Iwishyoualleverysuccessinthecomingexamination！第19页共34页7运动★范文12.假如你叫李飞，是学校“校园英语报”的编辑。你收到你同学张丽的姐姐的来信。请根据这位姐姐的要求，给张丽写一封回信。1.DearEditor,Iamreallyworriedaboutmysister,ZhangLi.ShealwayswatchesTVorreadsbooksinherfreetime.Shedoesn‟tlikegoingouttoexercise.I‟mafraidthatshewillbenotstrongenough.Couldyouwritetohertotellhertheimportanceofdoingexerciseandgivehersomeadvice?AworriedsisterDearZhangLi,2.Yoursisterisworriedaboutyouverymuch.Becauseyoudon‟ttakeanyexerciseinsparetime.Ithinkhealthisveryimportanttousteenagers.Eitherstudyorworkisbasedonstrongbody.Doingsportseverydayhelpsuskeephealthyandenergetic.Ifwedon'ttakeanyexercise,wemayfeeltiredandgetsickeasily.Soyoushouldgooutinsteadofstayingathome.Therearemanykindsofsportsyoucando,suchasrunning,swimmingandballgames.Justremember\"Exerciseonehouraday,keepillnessaway.\"Goodluck!Yours,LiFei多彩校园学校简介★范文13.在一次英语班会上，老师请同学们以ProudofMySchool请根据下面所给的提示写一篇发言稿。内容包括学校面貌，你在校的活动，以及你喜欢学校的原因。提示词：big\\small,trees,playgames,family,bekindto,be\\feelproudofProudofmyschoolMyschoolisverybigwithseveraltallbuildings.Wehaveabeautifulplaygroundwithlotsoftreesaroundit.Therearemanyflowerseverywhere.8Mybusyschoollifealwaysmakesmehappy.Ihavelotsoffunatschool.Inotonlyhaveallkindsofclasses,butalsotakepartin第20页共34页7colorfulactivitiesafterclasses.Iplaygamesanddolotsofsports,likeplayingbasketball,footballandtabletennis.Ilovemyschoolbecauseit‟slikeabigfamily.Thestudentsarefriendlyandtheteachersinmyschoolareaskindtousasourparents.Ifeelproudofmyschoolbecauseitisoneofthebestschoolsinmyheart.I'mleavingmyschool.I'llneverforgetthedaysI'vespenthere.友情至上★范文14.假设你叫LiuYan，初中三年，你与同学们在一起学习、参加各种活动，相互帮助，彼此之间建立了深厚的友谊.校园网的英语论坛开辟了“Thankyouletter”专栏.请按下面的要求给你的同学LingFeng写一封感谢信.注意：1.这封信要表达你对LingFeng的感谢；2.信中要简述感谢LingFeng的原因，适当举例，并谈谈自己的感受；提示词语：thankyou,attheendof,kind,forget,help…with,stayintouchDearLingFeng,Iwouldliketothankyouattheendofourmiddleschooleducation.Youhavebeenverykindandhelpfulsincewekneweachother.YouhavegivenmesomuchhelpthatIwillneverforget.Lastterm,Icaughtabadcoldandhadtostayathomeforaweek.WhenIwasworryingaboutthelessons,youcametomyhomeafterschoolandhelpedmewitheverysubject.Withyourhelp,Ididn‟tfallbehindothers.Sincethen,wehavebecomeveryclosefriends.IthinkI‟lltrytohelpothersjustlikeyou.Thankyouagain.Eventhoughwemaygotodifferentschools,I‟llalwaysstayintouchwithyou.Iwishyousuccessforthefuture.Yours,LiuYan课余活动★范文15.体育锻炼与参加夏令营Mostofusspendoneortwohoursonsportsoneweek,somedolessthanonehour.Asforme,mostofmysportstimeisforrunning.Sometimesplayingbasketballwithmyfriendsisalsofunforme.Ithinkit‟snecessaryforeveryonetogoouttodosportsbecauseit‟sgoodforourhealthandstudy.AndI‟d9lovetotakepartinthesummer第21页共34页7camp.Firstwe‟dbetterholdsomepartieswithforeignstudentsinordertoknoweachotherbetter.Nextwecanvisitsomemuseums,placesofinteresttoopenoureyes.FinallyIhopewewillhaveachancetoliveinforeignfamilies.Ithinkit‟sagoodwaytounderstandthedifferentculturesbetweendifferentcountries.Ireallywanttomakefriendswithforeignstudentsbecausewe‟reinthesameworld.Atthesametime,theactivitiescanhelpusrelaxourselvesaftertheexaminationsandimproveourEnglish.运动会★范文16.一家英文报社正在举办征文活动，请你积极参加.题目是“一次难忘的运动会”.内容要求：你或你的朋友参加了什么项目，结果怎样，感觉如何？提示词语：year,takepartin,fieldevent(relayrace,highjump,longjump,shotput,excited,takethefirstprize.Thisyear,Itookpartintherelayrace,Iwasrunningthelastlap.Itwasthefinaleventonsportsmeet.Everyonewaspayingattention.Alltherunnersgotreadyatthestartingline.Assoonastheracebegan,everyonewastooexcitedtostopcheering.Whenitwasmyturn,IcouldfeeltheClass4‟srunnercatchupwithme.SoItrymybesttorunfaster,finally,ourclasswonthefirstprizeinthemostexcitingevent.IwashappythatIwonanotherprizeformyclass.ThisisthemostunforgettablesportsthatIhad.毕业感想★范文17.初中生活马上就要结束了，三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想（请不要写出真实的学校名称以及真实姓名）。提示词供参考。threeyears,memories,oneof,oneday,think,happy/sorryHowtimeflies!Ihavestudiedinmyschoolforthreeyears.AndIwillgraduatefrommiddleschoolinamonth.Iameagertosharemyhappinessandsadnesswithyou.Ihadsomanymemoriesinthreeyears‟life.Onofthemimpressedmeverymuch.Istillremember,whenIbegantolearnEnglish,Ifoundittoodifficult.NomatterhowhardItried,Istillcouldn’tdowellinitandalmostgaveitup.AssoonasmyEnglishteacherfoundmyproblem,shehadatalkwithmeabouthowtolearnEnglishwell.Sincethen,shehaskepthelpingme.Littlebylittle,I’vebecomeinterestedinEnglishandI‟mgoodatit.IthinkIamsoluckytobecomeoneofher第22页共34页7students.I’velearnedalotfromher.Iwilltrytohelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.Ithinkitisahappythingtohelpothers.★范文18.2008年政府取消了“五一”黄金周（“Maygoldenweek”），但是，最近有些人又提出要恢复7天的长假.同学们也在校园网的“自由论坛”上展开了激烈的讨论.请你选用下面表格所提供的信息，写一篇短文，谈谈恢复长假的利与弊，并简述你的观点，给出一至两条理由.AdvantagesDisadvantageshaveagoodrestspendmoretime…with……causealotoftrouble…becrowdedeverywhere……In2008,Maygoldenweekwascanceled,butthisyearpeoplehavediscussedtheproblemwhetherweshouldrenewMaygoldenweekornot.Somepeoplethinkthe7-dayholidayisveryimportant.Firstly,wecouldhaveagoodrestandrefreshourselvesafterseveralmonthsofhardwork.Secondly,wecouldspendmoretimestayingwithourfamily.Thirdly,wewillbeabletousetheone-weekvacationtotraveltosomefartherplacessuchasforeigncountries.However,otherpeopleholdtheoppositeview.Theythinkitcausesalotofproblems.Itmayleadtotrafficjamandvisitorswillnotenjoythemselvesifthetravellingspotsareover-crowded.Asastudent,Iprefera7-dayholiday.NotonlycanIsleepwellanddoexercise,butalsoIcanreadsomeinterestingbooks.HowIwisha7-Dayholidaywouldcomesoonandwewillhavea7-dayholidaythen!公共规则★范文19.It‟snotallowedtothrowlitteranywhereinthepublicplaces.Everyoneshouldobeytherules.Speakingloudlyinthereadingroomisseemedtobeveryrude.Remembernottodoanythingthatmightmakeotherpeopleuncomfortable.Weshouldstandinlinewhenwearewaitingforthebus.Tryhardtogiveupthebadhabitsanddevelopgoodones.Weshouldrespecttheseniorpeopleandtalktothempolitely.Especially,weshouldgiveourseattooldpeopleorwomenwithbabiesonthebus.Ithinkhelpingotherscannotonlymakeushappybut第23页共34页7alsohelpusgetmoreexperienceinlife.Pleasecherishthepublicproperty.使用手机★范文20.关于中学生使用手机赞成意见：1.现在是信息社会，手机是最快的信息交流的工具之一。2.应充分利用好手机。如偶遇突发事故，可立即拨打手机求助。3.可在每天学习之余利用手机游戏放松一下自己。4.只要正确使用好手机，紧跟时间并无过错，追求时尚可以理解，但学习是首要任务。反对意见：1.学校已提供了公共电话，因此手机并不能带来更多的方便，而且花费较多。2.若课堂接听手机会影响上课。3.学生玩手机游戏或接发短信，将无法集中精力学习。Nowadaysmobilephonesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularamongthemiddleschoolstudents.Somethinkitisgoodforstudentstobringamobilephone.Butsomepeopledonotthinkso.Theythinkitisbadforstudentstobringamobilephone.Becausethestudentswillusemobilephonestoplaygames,senttextmessages,watchmovies,etcwhichwilldoharmtotheirstudy.Andifamobilephoneringintheclass,theteacherandstudentswouldbedisturbed.Inmyopinion,wecanbringmobilephonestoschool.Asweknow,the21stcenturyisamodernageandfullofinformation.Amobilephoneisoneofthequickesttoolsforustoexchangeinformation.Themobilephoneisafashionableandusefulinvention,soweoughttomakethebestuseofit.Supposethere‟sasuddenaccident,itismoreconvenientforustodialforhelpimmediately.There‟realsosomegamesinthemobilephone.Wecanrelaxourselvesbyplayingthemwhenwe‟retiredofourstudies.Inmyopinion,it‟snotwrongtofollowthefashion,butthemostimportantthingishowtousethemobilephoneinarightwayanddonotdisturbedothers.网络游戏★范文21.沉迷网络游戏题目：李小虎沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢？请用下面所给的提示词写一篇短文。提示词：giveupconcentrateonbe(become)interestedin第24页共34页7LiXiaohuspenttoomuchtimeplayingcomputergamesandhefellbehindothers.Asagood/closefriendofhis,Imustdosomethingtohelphim.First,Ithinkit‟sveryimportantforhimtolearnlessonswell.Heshouldspendmostofhistimeonhisstudyinsteadofcomputergames.Secondly,Imusttellhimthatplayingcomputergamestoomuchisbadforhishealth,especiallyforhiseyes.Sohemustgiveitup.Icanplaymoresportswithhimafterschool.Maybehewillbecomemoreinterestedinsportsthancomputergames.AndthenI'llaskhimtoconcentratemoreonhisstudy.Ofcourse,Iwilltrymybesttohelphimwithallhissubjects.IthinkIcandoitinmanyfunwaysandlethimfindmuchfuninstudying.Atthesametime,I'llaskbothhisparentsandourteacherstohelphim,too.IfItrythese,I'msurehewillmakegreatprogresssoon.电视节目★范文22.Asweknow,TVplaysanimportantpartinourdailylife.It'squickerandmoreconvenienttogetinformationfromTVthanfromnewspapers.Itisanimportanttooltospreadcultureandinformation,includingforeignlanguages.AndwecanlearnmuchknowledgefromTVwhichwecan‟tgetfrombooks.What‟smore,goodTVprogramscankeepuswiseandhealthy.WithTV,childrencangrowuphappily.SoitisnotreasonabletoforbidstudentstowatchTV.ButwatchingTVtoolongisnotgood.SittinginfrontofTValldaydoesharmtooureyesandwastesourtimeforstudy.SoweshouldtakeacorrectattitudetostudentswatchingTV.六、饮食与健康饮食安全★范文23.假如你是一所国际学校校办英文杂志的学生编辑.你看了下面这封信后，也想写一篇关于该信的读后感，内容要点包括：你对此事件的看法；解释你的理由并提出你的建议；向受害者表达尽快康复的祝愿.Today,Ireceivedthereader'sletter.Iwasshockedatit.Personallyspeaking,Ithinkweshould第25页共34页7paymoreattentiontothefoodsafety.Thegovernmentmustmakesomenecessarylaws.What'smore,somebusinessmenshouldn'tbeonlyinterestedinmakingmoney.Theymustcareaboutpeople'shealth.We'dbetternoteatanythingindirtyplacesthoughsomefoodisdelicious,becauseeatingunhealthyfooddoesharmtoourhealth.Finally,Ihopethefamilyintheaccidentwillgetbettersoon.减肥问题★范文24.假设你是《21世纪中学生英语报》“hearttoheart”专栏的编辑.下面是你收到的一位中学生的来信.13请你根据他来信的内容写一封回信.针对他的问题DearXiaowei,Weightproblemisquitecommonamongteenagerseverywhere.SoIdon‟tthinkyouhavemuchtoworryabout.Herearemysuggestions.EatinglateatnightisOK,butyoushouldtoeatmorefruitandvegetables,whicharegoodforyou.Also,whenyouarefree,you‟dbetterdomoreexercise.Runningisgreat.Youdon‟tlikerunningalone,butwhataboutrunningwithyourfriends?Oryoucandosometeamsportslikebasketball.I‟msureyourfriendswillbewillingtohelpyouloseweight.Ihopeyouhaveasmuchsuccessinlosingweightasyouhavehadinyourstudies.“Believemyself,andIwillwin.”It‟sreallyimportantforuswhenwemeetdifficulties.Don‟tloseheart;I‟msureyouwillsucceedoneday.Goodluck.Editor第26页共34页7中国城市与传统节日介绍首都北京★范文25.请你阅读你的加拿大网友Tommy的e-mail，根据e-mail的内容，给他写一封回信.DearLiLei,Ihaven'theardfromyouforalongtime.I'mgladtotellyouthatI'llvisitBeijingthissummervacation.ItissaidthatBeijingisagreatcitywithalonghistoryandmorechangeshavetakenplacesincethe2008OlympicGames.IwouldliketoknowsomethingaboutBeijing,suchasplacesofinterest,theenvironment,trafficandpeoplethere.I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yours,TommyDearTommy,I’mgladtoknowyouwillcometoBeijing.Beijing,thecapitalofChina,isoneofthelargestcitiesintheworld.Therearemanyplacesofinterest,suchastheSummerPalace,theForbiddenCityandtheGreatWall.Allofthemarebeautifulandwell-knowntotheworld.GreatchangeshavetakenplaceinBeijingsincewesuccessfullyheldthe20080lympicGames.Now,peoplepaymoreattentiontotheenvironment.Moretreesandflowershavebeenplanted.Forthetraffic,itisveryconvenientforpeopletotravelaroundBeijing,becauseseveralnewsubwaylineshavebeenbuilt.IfyoucometoBeijing,youwillfindpeoplehereareveryfriendlyandhelpful.What'smore,alotofpeoplecanspeakEnglish.Beijingisreallyanattractivecitywithalonghistory.I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yours,LiLei中国传统节日★范文26.根据中文大意和英语提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短第27页共34页7文。所给英文提示词供选用。注意：不要写出你的真实姓名和校名。假设你是刘伟，你的美国朋友MIKE想通过你了解中国的传统节日。请你根据提示，给Mike写一封e-mail，向他介绍我国传统节日春节的情况。内容提示：1.春节是中国最重要的传统节日；2.春节期间人们的主要活动（节前、除夕、节日期间）SpringFestival,traditional,decorate,ontheeveofthefestival,gettogether,setofffireworks,luckymoneyDearMike,Howareyou?I‟mreallygladthatyouareinterestedintraditionalChinesefestivals.TherearemanytraditionalfestivalsinChina,suchasSpringFestival,Mid-AutumnDayandsoon.I‟dliketointroducetheSpringFestivaltoyou.SpringFestivalisthemostimportanttraditionalholidayinChina.Itusuallylastsfor15days.Daysbeforethefestival,peoplecleantheirhouses.Theythinkcleaningsweepsanybadluck.Theydecoratetheirhouseswithpapercuts.Ontheeveofthefestival,familymembersgettogetherandhavebigmeals.ThentheywatchtheSpringFestivalGalaonTV.Atmidnight,theysetofffireworkstowelcomethenewyear.Duringthefestival,kidsgetluckymoneyfromoldpeople.Peoplevisittheirrelativesandfriends.Theywisheachahappyyearandgoodluck.Howhappyweare.Bestwishes!Yours,LiuWei名言警句1501.Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧.02.Timeismoney.时间就是金钱03.Easiersaidthandone.说来容易做来难04.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成.05.Lookbeforeyouleap.三思而后行.06.Knowledgeispower.知识就是力量07.Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.自助者天助.08.Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart.心之所愿，无事不成09.It‟snevertoooldtolearn.活到老，学到老第28页共34页10.Nopains,nogains.不劳无获11.11.Onceinabluemoon.千载难逢712.12.Tomaketheimpossiblepossible.将不可能变为可能13.13.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.失败乃成功之母14.14.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真情15.15.Firstthingsfirst.先做重要之事16.16.Greatmindsthinkalike.英雄所见略同17.Romewasnotbuiltinaday.成功并非一朝一夕的事18.Allthatglittersisnotgold.闪光的未必都是金子19.Eastorwest,homeisthebest.金窝银窝不如自家草窝20.Timeandtidewaitfornoman.时间不等人21.Thereisbutasecrettosuccess—Nevergiveup!成功只有一个秘诀—永不放弃！22.Wherethereislife,thereishope.有生命必有希望23.Beautywillbuynobeef.漂亮不能当饭吃24.Betterlatethannever.迟做总比不做好25.Everylittlehelps.点滴都有用；积少成多26.Theshortestanswerisdoing.最简短的回答就是行动27.Nonewsisgoodnews.没消息，就是好消息28.Wellbegun,halfdone.好的开始是成功的一半29.Allforone,oneforall.人人为我，我为人人30.Onefalsestepwillmakeagreatdifference.失之毫厘，谬以千里31.Factsspeaklouderthanwords.事实胜于雄辩32.Asthetree,sothefruit.种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆33.Toliveistolearn;tolearnistobetterlive.活着为了学习，学习为了更好的活着34.Likeandlikemakegoodfriends.趣味相投35.AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只学习不玩耍聪明的孩子也变傻.第29页共34页7八、书面表达的考点讲解和训练
【考点扫描】书面表达是每年中考必考题型，是考查学生交际能力的一个重要组成部分。书面表达通常有三种形式：1、书信、日记、通知、留言、假条；2、看图作文；3、根据汉语提示作文。无论是那一种书面表达形式，考生所写的短文都要紧扣主题、文理通顺，要素完整，语言准确、得当、格式正确、无大、小写和拼写错误，标点符号正确，能达到交际目的。【名师解难】一.训练方法1.记。认真系统复习和背诵基础知识和优美的句子、句型。中国有句古话，叫“熟读唐诗三百首，不会吟诗也会作”。同样，要使自己具有较强的写作能力，首先应该熟读和背诵一些句型和短文。许多同学写出来的语言根本不符合英语的语言习惯，相当一部分人有对照中文逐字翻译的不良习惯，不去理会中英文的差异。大量的背诵和阅读是提高写作能力的有效办法，同学们若有大量的现成语言积累在脑海里，自己写起文段来，就可以做到脱口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至发挥。2.练。每练一篇书面表达题，都要真正学到一点东西，不可贪多而边学边忘。平时可以采用循序渐进、灵活多样的练习方式。从根据提示词写单句开始，到写单句，然后到写几句话，最后到写流利的文段。尽量尝试多种形式的写作，如短信、说明、通知、便条、明信片、看图写作、根据表格或记录写短文等。3.写。要进行实战写作。要求自己在20分钟内写出100个词的短文，并且质量高、内容全、形式正确。这样形成习惯，考试时就能得心应手。第30页共34页7二.应试策略1.审题目：要切中题意。《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意？17就是要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。2.圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。3.列提纲：为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲。4.定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。5.写全文：写短文时要做到以下六个方面：(1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。(2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。1）语态、时态要准确无误。2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。3）注意人称代词的宾格形式。4）注意冠词用法，例如：Heisanhoneststudent.中的an不能写成a。5）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive,believe,fourteen,forty,ninth,restaurant等。(4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如：1）外表特征：tall,short,fat,thin,strong,weak,第31页共34页7ordinary-looking等。2）服饰颜色：red,yellow,blue,white,green,brown,black等。3）内心境界：glad,happy,sad,excited,anxious,interested等。4）感情描写：love,like,hate,feel,laugh,cry,smile,shout等。5）动作描写：come,go,get,have,take,bring,fetch等。(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法：1）表示并列关系的：and,aswellas,or…2）表示转折关系的：but,yet,however…3）表示时间关系的：when,while,after,before,then,afterthat…4）表示因果关系的：so,therefore,asaresult…185）表示目的的：inorderto,inorderthat,soasto,sothat…6）表示列举的：forexample,suchas…7）表示总结性的：ingeneral,inall,inaword,generallyspeaking…(6)不会表达，另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。6.改病句：认真检查，改正错误。中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：1）格式是否有错。2）拼写有无错误。3）语言是否用错。4）时态、语态错误。5）标点错误。6）人称是否用错。三.注意事项书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。每年阅卷老师在十来天的时间里要看十几万考生的作文，工作量之大，时间之紧，可想而知。书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。第32页共34页7【中考范例】VII.书面表达假如你叫张强。请根据下面美国朋友Bob的来信内容，结合你自己的情况写一篇语言连惯、符合逻辑的英文回信。要求：1.认真阅读来信的内容，从中获得你需要的信息。2.词数：80左右。回信的开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。注意：回信中不得出现你的真实地址和所在学校的名称。Dearfriend,I’myournewfriend.MynameisBob.I‟mfifteen.I‟mAmerican.IliveinNewYork.Iamamiddleschoolstudent.I‟mgoodatmath.Itisveryinteresting.Myfavoritesportisbasketball.AndIamnotonlyabasketballfanbutalsoagoodplayer.Ilikepopmusic.MyfriendsandIoftensingpopsongstogether.Afterschool,Iaminterestedingettingon-line.IhaveknownalotaboutChinafromtheInternet.NowI‟mlearningChinese.IhopeIwillvisityourcountryoneday.Pleasewritetomeandtellmesomethingaboutyourlife.I‟mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,BobDearBob,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,ZhangQiang【解析】根据前面提到第六个步骤，我们来写一下这篇书面表达。第33页共34页71.审题目：通过审题目我们可以知道：本篇书面表达应是写一封回信，写信人是张强，收信人是Bob，信的内容应是介绍张强自己的情况。2.圈要点：根据来信判断，写回信必须包括以下要点：1、收到对方的来信；2、愿意和对方交朋友；3、自己的姓名、年龄和住址；4、自己的身份、特长和爱好；5、自己的希望。3、列提纲：1.gotyourletter2.gladtobeyourfriend3.name,zhangQiang,fifteen,liveinShaanxi4.amiddleschoolstudent,likeEnglish,likesports,goodatdrawing,5.hopewe‟llmeetinChina4、定基调：1.时态：收到来信用一般过去时，介绍情况用一般现在时，希望用一般将来时。2.人称用第一人称。3.可按提纲的顺序来写。4.开头和结尾题目已经给出。5、写全文：DearBob,Igotyourletteryesterday.I‟mverygladtobeyourpenfriend.MynameisZhangQiang.I‟mfifteenyearsold,too.IliveinShaanxi.20I‟mamiddleschoolstudent,too.IlikeEnglishandphysicsverymuch.Ialsolikesports,butI‟mgoodatdrawing.IknowalittleaboutAmerica.Couldyoutellmesomethingmoreaboutyourcountryinyournextletter?Ihopewe’llmeetinChinasomeday.I’msurewe’llhaveagoodtimetogether.Pleasewrite(to)mesoon.Yours,ZhangQiang6、改病句：认真复查一边，如有错误，加以改正。第34页共34页
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