高三英语读后续写导练3学案
【示例3】
Willie’s aunt sent him for a birthday present a little writing book. There was a place in the book for a pencil. Willie thought a great deal of this little book, and always kept it in his pocket.
One day, his mother was very busy, and he called his dog, and said. “Come, Caper, let us have a play.”
When Willie’s mother missed him, she went to the door and looked out, and could not see him anywhere, but she knew that Caper was with him, and thought they would come back before long.
She waited an hour, and still they did not come. When she came to the gate by the road, she met Mr. Lee, and told him how long Willie had been gone. Mr. Lee thought he must have gone to sleep under the trees. So they went to all the trees under which Willie was in the habit of playing, but he was nowhere to be found.
By this time the sun had gone down. The news that Willie was lost soon spread over the neighborhood, and all the men and women turned out to hunt. They hunted all night.
The next morning the neighbors were gathered round, and all were trying to think what to do next, when Caper came bounding into the room. There was a string tied round his neck, and a bit of paper tied to it.
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Willie’s father, Mr. Lee, took the paper, and saw that it was a letter from Willie. He read it aloud. It said, “O father! Come to me. I am in the big hole in the grassland.” Everybody ran at once to the far corner of the pasture and there was Willie, alive and well, in the shaft(竖井). Oh, how glad he was when his father caught him in his arms, and lifted him out! 注意:
1. 所续写短文的次数应为150左右;
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词;
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语都为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你使用的关键词语。
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Now I will tell you how Willie came to be in the shaft.
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When he woke up it was morning. __________________________________________________________________________________________________
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导学 1 原文内容摘要
情节1
Willie liked the writing book his aunt gave him and always kept it in his pocket. 情节2
Willie and his dog Caper went out, lost. 情节3
They couldn’t be found.
情节4
With the dog Caper’s paper tied to a string round his neck, Willie was saved by his father from a shaft in the grassland. 导学 2 续写情节推理
Paragraph 1:
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可能的情节发展
从Paragraph 1 的段首语和上下文的情节4可知:
Willie fell into the shaft
从Paragraph 2 的段首句可知:
Willie slept in the shaft in the night.
合理的细节增加:
Willie 掉入shaft的细节描写;
根据情节4可知,Caper 也掉下来了,不然Willie 无法把string套到Caper 的脖子上;
Willie 有可能呼救过,但最终睡着了。
可用的词汇及篇章技巧
1. 可用的关键词
Caper, Shaft
2. 其他的可用词语
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lost one’s balance, fell into the shaft, fell asleep, cried for help, tried to pull Willie out
3. Willie 掉下shaft 的情节要描写得稍微详细一些。
Paragraph 2:
可能的情节发展
把情节1和情节4结合起来,就可知道Willie是想了一个什么办法摆脱困境。
write a letter, tie a string round the neck of the dog;
help the dog out
合理的细节增加
在具体的方法之前增加一个过渡句;
帮助Caper跳出shaft
可用词汇及篇章技巧
1. 可用的关键词
writing book, pocket, his father, string, shaft
2. 其他的可用词语
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hit upon an idea, tear a leaf, tie a string round the neck
导学 3 续写微作文
1. 当Caper看到他的小主人在井里的时候,他不愿离去。它往下探去,想把Willie拉出去。(用-ing形式做伴随状语)
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2. Willie大声地呼喊求救,知道天黑。不知不觉中,他在呼喊中睡着了。(用not long before)
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导学 4 根据前面的指导,完成例3的读后续写。
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【读后续写导学案3 参考答案】
导学3 续写微作文
1. When Caper saw that his little master was in the shaft, he wouldn’t leave, reaching down and trying to pull him out.
2. Willie cried and called for help until dark, and it was not long before Willie cried himself to sleep.
导学4 根据导学内容完成示例3的读后续写。
Now I will tell you how Willie came to be in the shaft. He and Caper went to the grasslan field, and came to the edge of the shaft and sat down. In bending over to see how deep it was, he lost his balance, and fell in. He tried in vain to get out. When the good little
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dog saw that his master was in the shaft, he would not leave, reaching down and trying to pull him out . While Caper was pulling Willie by the coat sleeves, a patch of grass gave away. Caper slipped and fell in, too. Willie called for help until dark, and it was not long before Willie cried himself in sleep.
When he awoke it was morning, and he began to think of a way to get out. The little
writing book that his aunt had given him was in his pocket. He took it out, and wrote the letter to his father. Then tearing the leaf out, Willie took a string out of his pocket, and tied it round Caper’s neck. After that he tied the letter to the string. Then he lifted the dog up, and helped him out, and said to him, “Go home, Caper, go home!” The little dog ran fast away, and was soon at home, with the letter to Willie’s father.
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