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读后续写和概要写作讲义 续写必备——与情感和动作有关的表达

2023-01-20 来源:好走旅游网


续写必备——与情感和动作有关的表达

害怕

① He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.

② Fear slowly creeps (爬,蔓延)upon her. ③ She was struck with horror when...

④ She was choked by fear.

⑤ Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.

⑥ A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear flooded over him. ⑦ Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated ['sʌfəkeitid] (窒息).

⑧ She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles(如坐针毡).

⑨ He froze in horror.

感动&羞愧

① Touched deeply/immensely, we…

② Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.

③ With tears streaming down her face, she...

④ Moved to tears, she failed to utter a word.

⑤ I felt my face burning with shame.

⑥ I was overcome by a wave of guilt and words failed to express my regret.

愤怒

① I was seized by anger. ② He was fuming [fjumiŋ] (冒烟的 )with rage.

③ His anger boiled over(沸溢 ;(情绪) 失去控制 ).

④ He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage(愤怒 ).

⑤ He was breathing fire and fury(激怒的感情) ['fjʊərɪ] .

⑥ His voice trembled with anger.

⑦ He gave me a look of burning anger.

⑧ He glared at me with burning eyes.

⑨ He flared up (发怒;爆发 )at the word.

⑩ His face clouded with anger.

⑨ They sat there with glum [glʌm](闷闷不乐的 )looks on their faces.

⑩ The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face.

⑪ He brimmed over with (满溢;充满)sorrow when...

⑫ They were immersed in(沉浸于)sorrow.

⑬ These days he was in low spirits.

喜乐

① The smile on her face shone like a diamond.

② A simile of understanding flashed across his face.

③ A ripple [‘rɪpl] (涟漪 )of excitement ran through them.

④ Laughter lingered around (萦绕 ) the room.

⑤ His eyes twinkled with pleasure.

⑥ A wild gaiety ['geɪətɪ] (快乐) took hold of her.

⑦ Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile.

⑧ I was wild with joy/ on the top of the world.

心理动词

• These events constantly remind me of my father’s absence.

• I immediately picture/imagine him walking through the door, wearing a shining smile.

• Most days I hope that maybe he will turn up at my doorstep one day.

• At that very moment, he wondered whether he would be sentenced to death for killing people.

• He was determined to tell people the truth, but no one could hear his voice.

• So the young man realized the police had arrested the wrong person, and he took the great courage to expose the real criminal.

• I focused my thoughts on every part of myself.

• We nodded our heads in agreement, understanding each other.

• Somehow I got the idea it would be fun to waken my father by firing it.

• I was wondering where he was. I had a new joke to tell him.

• I was afraid to go to sleep, for fear that I would wake up the way I had been before.

• Then I tried to figure out what I should do. Follow my friend to the hospital?

• There was nothing I could accomplish there, I convinced myself.

• All I could do at the hospital, I decided, was to get in the way.

• As I started my car, I realized that my friend had left his truck and keys at the courts.

• From that one experience I learned that the most important thing in life isn’t the money you make.

• I will cherish the fond memories for the rest of my life.

• He felt he could not continue and sat down on the lawn.

• At this dark and hopeless moment, a wonderful idea came to him. It filled his mind with a great, bright light.

• Tom thought for a moment, was about to agree; but he changed his mind.

手的动词

• Stunned, I stood up and gave her an awkward hug / hugged her in an awkward way.

• Speechless, she smiled radiantly and gathered her son into her arms.

• The nearer it got, the more she waved the yellow blouse wildly .

• The man took the sacks, reached into his pocket and placed four coins in Reuben's hand.

• Then, clutching the tin can, he headed for the shop.

• He parked down the street from Bobby’s house, and rushed to his front door, trembling with excitement.

• The man gently wrapped the gift in brown paper and placed the parcel in Reuben's hands.

• Dora lifted the lid, tears beginning to blur her vision.

• Seeing no other people notice us, I placed the Christmas present down and pounded his doorbell.

• She didn’t say a word, but smiled a watery smile and held my hand tightly.

• As we shook hands with the new owners, I told them how fortunate they were.

• He patted my head, and inquired: “Is there anything particular you want?”

• She stroked her fingers through my hair, and said: “Of course there is a Santa Clause.”

• He was squeezing my wrist so hard that it ached.

• She handed the napkin to me, and three $20 bills fell onto my desk when I opened it.

• Stevie looked at me, and then at his mother, then pulled out one of the napkins.

• “I'm Nancy Drew,” she said, holding out her hand.

• The class clapped warmly as Mr. Lee presented me with the reward.

• He reached into his pocket and withdrew a note.

• Mrs. Damon pointed to the quotation from Albert Einstein hanging on the wall.

• Calmly he picked up the brush and started again to whitewash.

脚的动词

• Then Lisa stood up and made her way through the crowd toward me.

• Lisa planted her feet firmly in front of me.

• She managed to climb onto it and waited patiently.

• Tom ran/rushed down Water Street, trembling with great panic.

• The shadows were lengthening when Tom arrived at(动作) the factory.

• Then, clutching the tin can, he headed for the shop.

• Racing home, Reuben burst through the front door.

• Disappointed and frustrated, the poor man made his way back to his family.

• Suddenly, the woman stood up and entered the house in tears.

• And yet, they all just stood there staring at me, motionless.

• Belle Ringer nodded thoughtfully, and Frannie hurried off to wait on the rest of her tables.

• I led them toward a large corner booth. I could feel the rest of the staff following behind as we marched through the dining room.

• I dragged myself through daily chores, feeling exhausted.

• The elderly man fled away with great panic.

• The man stepped back/stepped onto the platform to take a good look at the paintings.

眼的动词

• We all gather in front of the television, praying to catch a glance/glimpse of his face.

• Seeing no other people notice us, I placed the Christmas present down and pounded his doorbell.

• Singing happily, she gazed at her surroundings with large, innocent eyes.

• The woman was staring eagerly at the girl, trying to make a conversation.

• I watched helplessly, as the woman felt more and more frustrated and hopeless.

• Then I crept downstairs and examined the tags attached to each of the packages.

• Her eyes fell on the photos of her and me at my fourth birthday party.

• When he finished he raised/lifted his eyes and looked out the window.

• She had spotted a man pacing down the hall.

• When the students stepped off the bus, James’s eyes widened in surprise.

• We recognized the famous comedian on his arrival.

• Meghan nodded seriously, eyes glistening with held-back tears.

• Swallowing hard, I stared into Meghan’s eyes for a long moment, wondering how I could cope with it.

• Then he jumped up, eyes twinkling as he ran to fetch some of his prized Matchbox cars.

• I was taking my time, strolling in the park and looking in shop windows.

口的动作

• Tom murmured a thank you and ran home all the way.

• “Here, Mum! Here!” Tom exclaimed as he ran to her side.

• A young man came to the police station, surrounded by a group of journalists, declaring that he had spotted the murderer.

• I was getting ready to blow out all the candles and she’s getting ready to help me in case I ran out of air.

• “Time to go.” I whispered to the girl, wishing she could follow me right away.

• My teammates were all screaming as I dashed toward the finish line.

• I picked up the ball one last time and grumbled, “Please just come to get the damn ball.”

• Frannie quickly told Belle Ringer and the other two drivers about Stevie's surgery, and then sighed.

• The house got really noisy at that time, with everybody hollering and shouting at the top of his voice.

• “How can I let you throw away the thing that means the most to you?” I pleaded with him.

• They let out a surprisingly loud voice.

• The smile froze on his face; his mouth fell wide open.

• He interrupted the silence with an announcement: “The deadline to enter for the Competition is tomorrow.”

• “I haven’t finished; I need more time,” he begged. “That’s what Michelangelo said.” Mr. Edgar joked.

• She greeted James and inquired. “Are you ready for our field trip?” James didn’t respond.

• “What do you think matters for a bird?” Mrs. Damon questioned.

身的动作

• She felt asleep and dreamed of seeing Tom.

• Suddenly a tall figure dressed in a dark cloak appeared before him.

• Death spoke with a threatening voice, and disappeared.

• Dr. Urssenbeck suddenly found himself in a large room where thousands of candles were burning.

• The little girl slowly pushes herself on the swing.

• They are sitting outside in the cool night on a wooden porch, talking quietly.

• One of them approached and asked politely if I would throw the ball back to him.

• Wanting to appear agreeable, I bent down, picked up the ball and, eyes half-shut, threw it back as hard as I could.

• Once I was on the bus, I crouched in a seat and shut my eyes.

• In a flash my friend was in the car and gone, disappearing in a cloud of dust.

• For a moment I just stood there, paralyzed (呆若木鸡).

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