书面表达
2019
第四部分 书面表达 (满分20分)
22．（20分）假如你是遵义育才中学的大明，你们学校与上海阳光中学正在实施\"山与海对话\"（ Dialogue Between Mountain And Sea）项目．今年暑假，你的\"手拉手\"活动伙伴小海将来遵义进行首次交流活动．请根据下列提示给他写一封80词左右的书信．内容包括： 自我介绍 校园生活介绍 家乡介绍 你的建议 年龄、性格、爱好…… 社团活动…… 自然环境，名胜古迹…… 上网了解更多有关遵义的历史与文化…… 注意：1．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3．书信的开头和结尾已为你写出，不计入总词数．
提示词：遵义海龙囤Zunyi Hailongtun Castle 遵义会址 Zunyi Conference Site Dear Xiaohai，
I'm glad to hear that you are coming to Zunyi because of the project Dialogue Between Mountain And Sea． Now let me tell you something about me and my city． ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Welcome to my city! I'm looking forward to meeting you．
Yours sincerely，
Daming
22．【解答】Dear Xiaohai，
I'm glad to hear that you are coming to Zunyi because of the project Dialogue Between Mountain And Sea． Now let me tell you something about me and my city．
I'm a 14 ﹣year﹣old boy from Zunyi． I'm outgoing． I'm friendly to others．I like playing basketball．（自我介绍）There are many kinds of clubs in our school，such as swimming club，basketball club，tennis club，
English club，art club and so on．The students take an active part in the activities that they like after school． I either play basketball or practice speaking English after school．【高分句型一】（校园生活介绍）
Zunyi is a beautiful city which has a fantastic natural environment．There are some famous places of interest，such as Zunyi Hailongtun Castle and Zunyi Conference Site．（家乡介绍）
Before you come，you'd better learn more about Zunyi's history and culture on line．【高分句型二】（建议） Welcome to my city! I'm looking forward to meeting you．
Yours sincerely，
Daming
2018
第四部分 书面表达（满分20分）
成功源于勤奋，但部分人想成功，却不努力。假如你叫李华，是九年级八班的学生，请你以“Success comes from working hard”为话题，写一篇演讲稿，为全校师生做演讲，阐明成功源于努力学习、努力工作的道理。 要点如下:
1. 简短自我介绍 2. 列举生活学习中的实例 3. 感悟
要求:
1. 文章应条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明，80词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词
数）
2. 文章中不能出现真实姓名、校名、地名等信息。 参考词汇：shortcut(n.捷径) Dear my teachers and schoolmates,
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for your listening.
【分析】【高分句型一】
If you open the books about the great person or famous person， you will find that their successes have one thing in common -hard working．如果如果你打开关于伟大人物或名人的书，你会发现他们的成功有一个共同点--努力工作．
if引导条件状语从句用一般现在时表将来，主句用will+动词原形． 【高分句型二】
I used to have trouble in English listening．我以前在英语听力方面有困难． used to do sth过去常常做某事．
【解答】Dear my teachers and schoolmates， My name is Li Hua
and I'm from Class 8， Grade 9． If you open the books about the great person or famous person， you will find that their successes have one thing in common -hard working．（自我介绍，点明观点）【高分句型一】
There is no shortcut for success． Take me for example， I used to have
trouble in English listening． 【高分句型二】My English teacher told me that if I wanted to make a progress on my English listening ， I must practice listening more
and trying to memorize the pronunciation． I took the advice and practiced in the morning and before the bed time every day． After one month， I made a progress on my English listening test．（生活中的实例）
In a word ， success comes from hard working．（总结和感悟） That's all for my speech． Thank you for your listening．
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
2017
笫二节书面表达（计20分）
我们都知道美国登山运动员Aron Ralston，他的故事令人感动，激励人心。在我们身边，一定也有那么一些人和事，他们或许平凡，或许渺小，但却总能鼓舞我们，催人奋进。
请以“The Person Encouraging Me”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。 基本情况 品质特征 具体事例 对你的影响 年龄、职业、外貌…… 勇敢、善良、勤奋……（任选其一） …… …… 要求：1．任选一项品质特征，并用具体事例加以阐述。 2．文中不能出现真实的姓名、校名和地名。
The Person Encouraging Me
My English teacher is a middle - aged man who is about l.7 meters tall. He is a bit fat with black hair and big eyes. His appearance would leave you an impression that he is very strict. In fact, he is a kind and easy - going man.
I can still remember one thing happened when I was in Junior 2.I forgot to do my homework.I thought he would be angry and punish me. However, he just kindly told me what I should do in the future.I was so moved that I decided to finish my homework on time from then on.
My English teacher is my hero.I am studying English very hard now, because I want to be an English teacher like him in the future.
按5个档次给分，具体要求请参照一下评分细则。 档次 分值 要求 涵盖所有的内容要点；运用了较丰富的词汇、语法和句式结构；有效地五 17~20 使用了语句间的连接成份，且表述清楚，书写规范，达到预期的写作目标。如果有小错误，是因为运用复杂结构所致。 涵盖主要内容，语法结构和词汇基本准确，虽有少数错误，但书写工整四 13~16 规范。 涵盖基本内容，但句子不太连贯，语法错误 三 二 一
9~12 较多。 4~8 0~3 出一些与话题有关的词或短语给1~3分。 能围绕话题写出几个简单的句子。 不写或抄写与话题无关的内容不得分；若能写
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