英语写作的秘诀(帮你快速提分)

知己知彼，百战不殆 我们…

1、单词、语法学了很多但是不会用； 2、缺乏系统化的作文训练：读得多，写的少。 3、不了解阅卷老师的情况。 阅卷老师的“阅卷感想”

1.句子结构、用词务求正确！正确！用词地道准确是最 最核心的！ 2. 卷面很重要，字不能太小太挤，一定整洁、写齐，不勾不画。 3. 好的句式，丰富的词汇一定是得分点。 4. 审题跑偏一定会被扣分同时着重在语言表达。

5. 抄袭其它文章或背上一篇不相关的范文0分。左抄一句右抄一句中间夹一句0-5分，

拼音、汉字肯定极差档。

6. 背谚语若干，生搬硬套，必然扣分。

7.高分27、28分，无29、30分满分卷，全省平均分16分。

8.标准差过于集中，保险分18分，24分，阅卷中后期高分打得少，更加重视书写。 What on earth do they care about? 1、卷面 2、分段 3、遣词造句 4、过渡词 5、内容要点 关于卷面 卷面要求：

Clean & clear.干净、清楚

 大小一致  落在线上

 避免毛刺  用一条横线修改

关于分段&过渡词

The basic structure of English paragraph 英文段落基本结构:

T 主题句 Topic Sentence D 拓展句 Developing Sentence C 总结句 Concluding Sentence. Standard Paragraph Format 标准段落格式

 TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT. Firstly,DDDD DDDDDDDDDDDDDDD. Secondly, DDD DDDDDDDDDDD. Thirdly, DDDDDDDD DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD. In conclusion, CCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC.

 社会主义好. Firstly, 人们能温饱. Secondly, 购物不花钱. Thirdly, 有病死不了. In conclusion, 社会主义真好！

最常用的“主题句” 表达观点：

From my perspective, …… 解释理由：

There are two main reasons accounting for my view. …… 给出建议：

Here are several suggestions for you. …… 最常用的“过渡词” 分两点拓展：

For one thing,第一点. For another,第二点.

On (the) one hand,第一点.On the other hand,第二点. 分三点拓展：

First and foremost,第一点. Additionally,第二

点. Last but (certainly) not least,第三点.

分四点拓展：

To begin with,第一点. Moreover,第二点. What's more,第三点.Finally,

第四点.

关于内容

Two Principles:

1、对于题中所给的内容：全面；

Cover all the points given. 2、对于自己发挥的内容：简单；

As easy as possible!

写自己熟悉的、会写的内容！

“内容定档，语言定分”

请翻译：

我是个学生。I am a student.

我是个新东方的学生。I am a student of New Oriental School. 请翻译：

我爱你。I love you.

我非常爱你。I love you very much. 英语语法入门级基本规律 主干成分：

汉语和英语基本一致； 英语中有若干固定句型； 修饰成分：

汉语修饰成分放在被修饰词前面，而英语...

较短修饰成分放在被修饰词前面； 较长修饰成分放在被修饰词后面。

最简单的升级技巧 黄金圣衣句型： 1、It is clear that... 2、It is obvious that... 3、There is no doubt that... 4、 No one can deny... 5、Needless to say,...

6、It goes without saying that... 小结：

Three principle of an outstanding composition for EXAMS. 杰出应试作文的三个原则

Clear logic(structure) 清晰的结构 Simple Contents 简单的内容

Beautifully polished language 精彩的语言 学以致用

完成以下作文，注意结构、内容、语言

 假定你是李华。在一个英文网络论坛上，你看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发帖

（post）寻求帮助，请根据帖子内容，写作要点和要求回贴。 写作要点：

1.告诉Grown-up要理解母亲；

2.给Grown-up提出解决问题的具体建议。 要求：

1.短文需写在答题卡的指定区域。

2.短文词数不少于80（不含已写好的部分）。 3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯 4.书写须清晰、工整。 范文1：简单的内容+清晰的结构

 In my opinion, you should understand your mom. Firstly, s

he loves you. Secondly, she takes care of you. Thirdly, she wants to help you. 范文2：使用高级的过渡词

 In my opinion, you should understand your mom. First and for

emost, she loves you. Additionally, she takes care of you. Last but not least, she wants to help you. 范文3：加入“黄金圣衣句型”

 In my opinion, needless to say, you should understand your mom. First and foremost, there is no doubt that she loves you. Additionally, no one can deny she takes care of you. Last but not least, it is obvious that she wants to help you.

范文4：加入“尾巴句型”、使用“换词大法”

 In my opinion, needless to say, you should understand your mom. First and foremost, there is no doubt that she loves you so much that she has devoted a lot to you（结果）. Additionally, no one can deny she takes care of you, for you are the apple in her eyes（原因）. Last but not least, it is obvious that she wants to help you so that you can enjoy a happy and health growth （目的）.

万能单词：enjoy 搞定一切动作 (褒) 过生日：enjoy her birthday 过年：enjoy the new year 打扑克：enjoy cards(poker) 混饭：enjoy a meal 上网：enjoy the Internet 享福：enjoy her life