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2021-08-26 来源:好走旅游网
书面表达。(满分20分)评分总则

1. 本题总分为20分,按各档次打分。

2. 评分时,先根据文章的内容和结构初步确定所属档次,再根据语言酌情打分。

给分范围和要求:

第五档(优秀):19-20分高水平完成了试题规定的任务 一内容丰富,构思精巧,结构紧凑,布局合理,过渡自然。

一准确地使用了丰富的词汇和语言结构,表达流畅、自然,无误,具有很强的语言运能力。 第四档(良好):16—18分较好完成了试题规定的任务 一内容详实,结构清晰,详略得当,过渡自然。

-比较准确地使用了较为丰富的词汇和语言结构,表达流畅、自然,具有较强的语言运用能 力。 第三档(中等):13-15分基本完成了试题规定的任务 一结构明确,内容较为充实,详略得当。

一较为准确地使用了合理的伺汇和语言结构,能够比较清楚表达意思,具有一定的语言运用 能力。 第二档(较差):8-12分未完成试题规定的任务 一文章结构能够基本符合试题写作要求。

一词汇和语言结构不能完全满足写作任务的要求,语言不够连贯且错误较多,影响对写作内 容的理解。

第一档(差):0—7分未完成试题规定的任务

一内容严重缺失,结构详略混乱一词汇和语言不能满足写作任务的要求,语言错漏太多,无法传达有效信息。

一与规定内容无关的抄袭或伪装抄袭,均为0分。

如何获得高分:

① 要点全面

认真审题。做到三定一列。

“定体裁、定人称、定时态;列内容要点”行文连贯 合理使用连接词(篇章浑然一体,连贯流畅) 适当增加细节使用较多的词汇

高级词汇,短语的使用使用较多的语法结构

2013IX.书面表达。(15分)

埃及千年神庙惊现中文涂鸦“丁 XX到此一游”。此事曝光后,引起国内外广泛关注, 某国外英语网站就此发起讨论。请你以一名中国中学生(网名Whitecloud)的身份, 跟帖发表自己的看法。 要点提示:

1. 表明身份; 2. 发表看法; 3. 你的行动

要求:

1. 词数:80词左右,开头己给出,不计入总词数。 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

Bluesky: 丁 xx到此一•游v appeared in the ancient temple in Egypt. It's said Ding is a Chinese school student. That's surprising. Maybe Ding will become known this

Whitecloud: I come from ChinaOne possible version:

Whilecloud: 1 come from China I'm also a middle school student like Ding. When I read the news, my heart ached (疼).What Ding did made me sad. Ding should feel sorry fbr that. As a student, it's very important to care about what we do in public. For example, we'd better keep our voice down . I will be more polite to people around me and take better care of public things. And I'm sure wc Chinese will show our best to the whole world! Sincerely, yours2014

IX.书面表达。(15分)

为了更好地开展2014年全民阅读活动,有关部门就如何为市民创造良好的阅读环 境广泛征求意见,你班将举行一次英语主题班会来讨论这个话题。清你写一篇发言稿, 提出自己的想法和建议。

要点提示:

1. 阅读的好处:

2. 你的建议(如:建更多小型图书馆,经常性地介绍好书等); 3

要求:

1. 词数:80词左右开头,开头己给出,不计入总词数。 2. 文中不能出现自己的名字和所在学校的名称。

Hello, my dear friends. As we all know, reading is very important to us.

One possible version:

Hello, my dear friends. As we all know, reading is very important to us. It can not only enrich our life but also broaden our horizons(它不仅能够丰富我们的生活 还能拓宽我们的视野).Also \\vc need to make a good atmosphere (氛围)for the readers. To achieve this goal, I think we must do the following things well.

Firstly, in the reading room ,we must keep quiet. Wc should provide some help to the man that needs help, and we should not to speak loudly. It is very impolite to everyone. Besides, we should keep the reading room clean ,because it is a public to us. We can't eat anything or throw the rubbish on the ground. Music, singing and smoking are not permitted (允许).Lastly, there must be lots of books in the reading room. If we have some interesting books, wc can donate them to the library. At the same time, our government should pay much money on the building of libraries.

Hope everyone can enjoy reading!

2015IX.书面表达。(16分)

拿大中学生Peier在你校学习期满,回国后写一封感谢信,同时指出了同学们的一 些不良行为。假如你是学生会主席李华,请根据要点提示给Peter回-•封电子邮件。

要点提示:

1. 表示感谢;

2. 表达意愿(告别高声喧哗、乱丢乱扔等不良行为); 3

要求:

1.80词左右。开头和结尾巳给出,不计入总词数。 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 Dear Peter,

I'mgladtoreceiveyouremail.

Best wishes!

YoursLi Hua

One possible version:

Dear Peter,

I'm glad to receive your email. Thank you for telling us so much. Tm very sorry for what we have done.

As a student, we should learn to have good habits. First, wc will keep quiet in public. Also, we will no long throw things here and there. What's more, we won't write or draw on the desks and other places, and we \\¥川 be more polite to others.

rd like to invite you to visit our school again. I'm sure you will see a cleaner school. Best wishes!

YoursLi Hua

2016IX.书面表达(16分)

随着外国游客日益增多,未来科技馆决定选拔部分中学生在假期为他们提供 英语讲解任务。科技馆需要应征者提交英文自荐信。假如你叫袁新,你有能力并 希望成为一名讲解员。请按要求写一封自荐信。

要求:

1. 必须写出三点及以上的自荐理由;

2. 词数:80-120词,开头和结尾己给出,不计入总词数。 参考要点:

1. 擅长英语(英语水平,沟通能力......); 2. 热爱科学(科学知识,创新能力......);

3Dear sir,

I'm a junior student from Chongqing Xinhua School. I'd like to become one of your guides.

Thank you! Yours,

Yuan XinOne possibe version:

Dear sir,

I'm a junior student from Chongqing Xinhua School. I'd like to become one of your guides.

I've learned English for 6 years. I spend a lot of my free time listening to English news and watching English movies, so I'm good at English. That is to say, it's not difficult for me to talk with people in English.

I have been interested in science since I was a child. My favorite books arc on science. Some new ideas often come out of my mind, which has encouraged me a lol. With these ideas, I have made some small inventions to make my life more comfortable.

Besides, I feel like making friends with different people, no matter where they come from. Tm sure that I will get along well with them. I would be most thankful if you could give me the chance.

Thank you! Yours,

Yuan Xin2017 IX.书面表达。(18分)

在过去的日子里,我们曾经欢笑,也曾经哭泣......照片,或将这些精彩定格,或勾起 你对往事的回忆。某英语网站向你发出邀请,请你按要求用英语写一篇文章,分享你照 片背后的故事。 要求:

1. 故事必须原创;2.80--120词,开头己给出,不计入总词数;

3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

参考要点:

1. 描述你的照片(时间,地点,人物......);分享你的故事(起因,经过,结果……); 2. 谈谈你的感受(感动,怀念,影响......)。 This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo,.

【范文】Possible version

This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo, I was 10 while my dad looked younger. Look, we are playing ping pong happily.

I used to be a ping pong player. My dad trained me so hard, though he was tired after a day's work. Once, I lost a game and I felt so sad that I wanted to give up. My father said nothing, sitting quietly with me. The next morning, I found a piece of paper. It said, \"Never give up, dear. I am proud of you!,,

Now, I spend less time playing ping pong because of my busy study. But I will never forget what my father told me. He is proud of me. How lucky I am to be his daughter!

2018IX.书面表达。(满分20分)

假如你是李华,你校正举办英语读书节活动,你在参与活动的过程中遇到一些困难。 请给你的英国朋友Nick写一封email向他求助。

要求:

1. 80—120词,开头和结尾己给出,不计入总词数; 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

参考要点:

1. 活动情况简介(时间、内容......);

2. 遇到的困难(如:缺少相关书籍、英语阅读困难......): 3. 请求帮助的事项。

Dear Nick,How's everything going?

Yours,Li Hua

IX.书面表达。(满分20分)One possible version:

Dear Nick,

How's everything going?

Our school is holding an English reading festival this June. I'm very interested in it. There are many different activities in the reading festival such as reading good English books, sharing good stories and so on. It's a good chance fbr us to learn more about western cultures.

However, I have some problems. First, I don't have enough books. For example, I want to get some books about western history. Next, Tm not so good at English, 1 have trouble in reading.

Would you please share some good books with me and give me some advice on reading? I expect to hear from you soon. Best wishes!

Yours, Li Hua

2019IX.书面表达。(满分20分)

你正在组织一项暑假期间到山区为期一周的游学和帮扶活动。作为发起人,请你写 一篇发言稿,在你校“英语时光''广播中号召更多的同学参加。

要求:

1.80—10()词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

参考信息:

1. 活动缘由(孤独、帮扶、游学......) 2. 活动构想(时间、地点、内容......)

3

Hello, everybody. I am planning a summer trip called \"Be a Kid in the Mountain,,.

Thank you!

One possible version:

Hello, everybody. I am planning a summer trip called \"Be a Kid in the Mountains\". It will provide us with a meaningful week staying with the students in (he mountains.

As many of their parents leave for the city development, these students might feel lonely and some may even find it hard to go on studying. So we can bring (hem some school things like books and pens for their study, and prepare some interesting stories to share. In the daytime, we can go hiking and do some teamwork. In the evening, we can do such activities as popular games and group dance around the fire.

Isn't that exciting? Come and join us. Lets be \"a kid in the mountains\". I believe it will bring sunshine to the mountains as well as more confidence to us.

Thank you!

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