朋友说我写的英文很Chingish,谁可以帮我指点一下?(下面是节选)
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Running, running and running! That’s all during the past 25 minutes. With two bags in one hand and an umbrella the other , my friend and I were running at light’s speed. Passers-by looked at us oddly ,even turned back to look again and wondered whether a bang of scoundrels were chasing us two girls. It is pity there was no NEWS！
Now, 2:33 pm, I am sitting in the Main Building in our university, attending a meeting, I feel bored beside exhausted! Sweat is running down my check, my long black hair, my back, and my legs. Everybody is sitting quietly except a few who are signing in. I felt my face red due to be late here. Previously, it must be me who went there earlier to conserve two seats. Reversely, it was my friend who did it! Wow, it is 2:29 but the meeting was scheduled from 2:30.
“Ladies and gentlemen, applause for ourselves ! ” the host say, “It is the first time that nobody’s late for such regular conference ! Pretty good ！”
I am indeed a lucky dog! How breathtaking! By merely one minute, I would have been the black sheep!
At 2:00pm, I was shopping with one of my best friends in Wuyicheng, trying on a pair of high-heeled shoes and bargaining which is not for more discount , but the shoes were worn .
Four and a half hours ago, I was helping a friend who had an interview but without enough self-confidence.we practiced where I acted as the interviewer and she was the corresponding part at my room.
Let’s set the hands of the clock back to 7：10am. , I was talking with Mr. Wu，the gate-keeper of our Foreign Language School Teaching Building.
“So early again？It’s Saturday today. How time flies!” sighed he.
“ Yeap. ”
“But I am afraid you can’t study here today. The classrooms will be unavailable after eight because there will be Cambridge English classes for young learners” he continued.
“All right, I can do some morning reading there . Then, I will move to somewhere else by the time. However thanks for informing me.”
Though I didn’t sleep until after twelve last night, I woke up early at six this morning. .In order not to disturb my room mates who went to bed as late as me, I stayed in bed until 6:30.My room mates slept till 9:00. I felt nothing when they said that I was just too energetic! Yea, there is nothing wrong with me. I am young and that’s what it should be!
